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Round 2: Jay 3rd 1-0 .vs Phil Benjamin 0-1
Battles Up Tuesday. House Rules 10-14 lines Verses Due Friday. Voting Ends Monday Night _______________________ G' luck to everyone. Double Elimination |
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dawg u pose to be booted so appreciate ya stay//
leave u like ya avatar but i'll Tuck ya feet away// fill u wit belly wit cement and watch u eat the pave// Evidence? please i'm like the Bulls i throw the Heat Away// and i'll stab u wit the pencil just watch ya flow-leak// and my level too high dawg you'll catch a nose-bleed// 0-1? that aint a battle record, thaz score for girls numbers// ugly ass bitch couldnt win a beauty contest for plumbers// i roll wit BTR kid and we straight smoke u wack herbs// only friends u got is when u type in ya password// and u got an LP big whoop u still cant see me// first thing i thought was "only a faggot rhymes the name of they Cd"// p'z |
okay son
you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this i'll kidnapp an murder you, so any shots you send won't harm me when i leave you mia, there wont be any sun, beachs or palm trees your an easy win for us, cuz nuthin you spit is near dope i'll roll up on the jay, spark'em, ...then pass'em around for the whole league too smoke weak structure an played punchs, your verse's just suck dude i haven't seen so many slashes on one body..since the last time i cut you you'll get the one banger, my hands heaver than bricks i'll hit'em wit sucha second round KO..canibus asked me to do the remix i'm too fast to hit, so you can throw fist's wit rage cause my face'll get less hit's than ya soundclick page |
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dawg u pose to be booted so appreciate ya stay//
leave u like ya avatar but i'll Tuck ya feet away// oookay start... fill u wit belly wit cement and watch u eat the pave// Evidence? please i'm like the Bulls i throw the Heat Away// the 1st line is horrible.. 2ed is decent... and i'll stab u wit the pencil just watch ya flow-leak// and my level too high dawg you'll catch a nose-bleed// oookay. 0-1? that aint a battle record, thaz score for girls numbers// ugly ass bitch couldnt win a beauty contest for plumbers// kinda funny no punch thou... i roll wit BTR kid and we straight smoke u wack herbs// only friends u got is when u type in ya password// aight decent... much better... and u got an LP big whoop u still cant see me// first thing i thought was "only a faggot rhymes the name of they Cd"// preety weak ending man... you had 1 decent bar in there.... you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this eeeh start... i'll kidnapp an murder you, so any shots you send won't harm me when i leave you mia, there wont be any sun, beachs or palm trees preety decent... your an easy win for us, cuz nuthin you spit is near dope i'll roll up on the jay, spark'em, ...then pass'em around for the whole league too smoke ookay.. weak structure an played punchs, your verse's just suck dude i haven't seen so many slashes on one body..since the last time i cut you aight.. you'll get the one banger, my hands heaver than bricks i'll hit'em wit sucha second round KO..canibus asked me to do the remix ha decent... plus that 2ed round knock out by canibus was hot lol... i'm too fast to hit, so you can throw fist's wit rage cause my face'll get less hit's than ya soundclick page HAHA NICE ENDING.... vote: Phil Benjamin clearly shut'em down hard body... really no comp in this one... he had way harder punches more creative and i thought was more original with better concepts.... NICE DROP Phil Benjamin I DIG's IT.... |
jay:
dawg u pose to be booted so appreciate ya stay// leave u like ya avatar but i'll Tuck ya feet away// 2/5 - Weak Opener. fill u wit belly wit cement and watch u eat the pave// Evidence? please i'm like the Bulls i throw the Heat Away// 3/5 - ok. and i'll stab u wit the pencil just watch ya flow-leak// and my level too high dawg you'll catch a nose-bleed// 2/5 - nah. 0-1? that aint a battle record, thaz score for girls numbers// ugly ass bitch couldnt win a beauty contest for plumbers// 3/5 - iight., i roll wit BTR kid and we straight smoke u wack herbs// only friends u got is when u type in ya password// 4/5 - niice. and u got an LP big whoop u still cant see me// first thing i thought was "only a faggot rhymes the name of they Cd"// 3/5 - ok closer. 17/30 Phil: you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this 4/5 - niice opener. i'll kidnapp an murder you, so any shots you send won't harm me when i leave you mia, there wont be any sun, beachs or palm trees 2/5 - meh. your an easy win for us, cuz nuthin you spit is near dope i'll roll up on the jay, spark'em, ...then pass'em around for the whole league too smoke 4/5 - niice. weak structure an played punchs, your verse's just suck dude i haven't seen so many slashes on one body..since the last time i cut you 2/5 - nah. you'll get the one banger, my hands heaver than bricks i'll hit'em wit sucha second round KO..canibus asked me to do the remix 3/5 - decent. i'm too fast to hit, so you can throw fist's wit rage cause my face'll get less hit's than ya soundclick page 2/5 - ok closer. 17/30 Tie-Breaker best line in battle: you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this vote-phil |
JAY 3RD
dawg u pose to be booted so appreciate ya stay// leave u like ya avatar but i'll Tuck ya feet away// Lol, I like the personal on the avy, nice fill u wit belly wit cement and watch u eat the pave// Evidence? please i'm like the Bulls i throw the Heat Away// Wording In the setup was shit…decent punch and i'll stab u wit the pencil just watch ya flow-leak// and my level too high dawg you'll catch a nose-bleed// Played 0-1? that aint a battle record, thaz score for girls numbers// ugly ass bitch couldnt win a beauty contest for plumbers// No….This was Shitt i roll wit BTR kid and we straight smoke u wack herbs// only friends u got is when u type in ya password// ….Nothing complex, and no direction at all and u got an LP big whoop u still cant see me// first thing i thought was "only a faggot rhymes the name of they Cd"// Wasn’t a strong closer…Not creative enough for n/p… PHIL you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this Hahaha, this was a decent personal…wording could be better though i'll kidnapp an murder you, so any shots you send won't harm me when i leave you mia, there wont be any sun, beachs or palm trees Naw, im not feelin this your an easy win for us, cuz nuthin you spit is near dope i'll roll up on the jay, spark'em, ...then pass'em around for the whole league too smoke Who’s us? What are you venom? Lol…And this bar is 1000 times played, lol…The J/weed/joint thing is hella over used weak structure an played punchs, your verse's just suck dude i haven't seen so many slashes on one body..since the last time i cut you Wording was to stretched in the main punch you'll get the one banger, my hands heaver than bricks i'll hit'em wit sucha second round KO..canibus asked me to do the remix Naw, not to mention the wording in the first line was bad i'm too fast to hit, so you can throw fist's wit rage cause my face'll get less hit's than ya soundclick page PLAYED PUNCH! Man are soundclick punches played… Overall: I think Phil has more talent battle wise, but he came very played in this battle and lacked any real creativity that stayed consistent. Jay had a good and decent bar, but then a played and a couple wack ones. So this battle actually ends up being close, but I think for being less played, I have to give it to Jay 3rd… |
Jay-
i roll wit BTR kid and we straight smoke u wack herbs only friends u got is when u type in ya password Phil- you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this your an easy win for us, cuz nuthin you spit is near dope i'll roll up on the jay, spark'em, ...then pass'em around for the whole league too smoke v/Phil for a overall better punches n verse |
Phil Wins 1-1
Jay 3rd Loses 1-1 |
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