FEATURED TRACK Splash
 

Warning: This track may piss off haters and virgins. Beautiful women may find them selves aroused. Proceed with caution!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4658599

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http://community.rapverse.com/showp...43&postcount=14
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3105909

beat is nice
i make her flow n make her splash
^lol definition of a real man right there^
smashin off stats is off idk those two adlibs still sound off to me
weak qbs to see how they take the sac niceness
see how she sings nice delivery.on that line
lol will i see you tonight that line is sooo true


basically everything i said last nigth
probably my 2nd favorite track from you

solid .

Ok.... I already heard this before the hook..... ANYways.... I been hearin this for a few days and seriously think this one of the top 5 tracks to come off RV. Beat is straight as hell... Quality is ill, no question... Flow is flawless.... And commercial appeal is right on. I mean, its shit I been bangin in my truck, when I could have been playin somethin i bought. Lyrics are somethin we can all relate to (even when we tryna be better dudes haha) but seriously, this track is nice as hell. word.

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mmm dunno bout the beat, im not really feeling it,quality is pretty good, hook is mmm dunno, verse starts, pretty dope, nice flow man, adlibs are good and not at the same time you know, nice lyrics, who made the beat? anyway second verse starts off funny lol, " While he fucks his hand" haha, pretty cool song, not my fav from you but still good, dope drop

Speats

listening

Beat is dooooooope..You come in nice, hook is nice and mellow, I likes..Emotion in the verse is nice and strong..Flow is smooth as always..Liked the "head to toe" line along with some others..Overall, this was a pretty solid piece. We need to get on a track together sometime. :love:

this beat is hard
it sounds kind of like Cassidy's AM to the PM
this should be my damn theme song
lol @ wiping off her mouth
the chorus is weak to me
but it fits the song, but I think you could've came up with something a tad bit better
lol @ you'll be fuckin me, while he fucks his hand
HAHAHAHAHAHA @ I turn chicks into weak QB's to see how they take a sack
if suck it or not can get played on the radio this mos def can
lol, make a radio edit
but yo, this beat sounds like AM to the PM, man
anyway, this shit is tight

damn hahahaa word up verybody thanks for the feed and what not

lets see what else ya got to say about it

yo this is a pretty hard song...sounds like somthing like The Dips would make.....iono sounds like a dipset beat! The flow is hot..and of course as always punchlines and lyrics are crazy my dude... the only thing I think you should do is change the way you deliverd the hook....should've put a lil more into it..and this would've been 200 times better..but its still hot and Zone's right this beat is really hard

for word could you rtf on this - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235928

lmao beat the puss to applesauce......
wizard line funny....
head to toe coo ish...
whip line hilarious
lmao....like u sat in suttin is funny

fuck his hand funny
beats line tight
qbs.....tight

eyes open wide....nice

overall this is crazy funny......good shyt like always

haha word up PTizzle i feel you.

Omega, good lookin out mayne



chea!! chea!! chea!! chea!!

aint even gonna rtf :(

i'm sad now

:cry:

lol - I already told you yesterday or the day before track was nice, and flow/lyrics is nice. Beat's live. Keep at it, dooms.

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flipper - word up kid. you gotta get back on the mic foo *bitchslaps the monkeyshit outta you


now up-u-latin for that goodness

wow... who produced this shit... bass is really bumpin.....

Hook??? at the beginnin..... shit is kinda nice, but ur voice seems too loud for that part of the beat to me... hah, make her splash.... nice... hook is decent but u dont seem to have as much emotion as u do on ur verses

First Verse: beat the puss to applesauce, lmao..... u got some nice lines in this shit... "wipin her mouth" now that shits funny

Second Verse: fucks his hand.... lmao, sat in somethin.... these lyrics are nice but it does seem like u overpower the beat too much, might needa turn the beat up alil bit...

Third Verse: opens up pretty nice... i like this one actually the most then the others, atleast some sort of story to it, but u still inject some nice wordplay/punches.... heard dudes make alotta braggin tracks, but not alot of sex braggin shit....

i dunno if i really like the concept, lmao, shit is raw..... but i dont really wanna hear about how YOU get down.... some shit is funny tho about takin another dudes girl..... deso track, but i heard alot better shit from u