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Ransum vs Valor
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-02-08 at 06:04 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Valor has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-02-08 05:35 PM.
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just hurry up and spit man im actually in a hurry
rv had no activity, so i had to let you join the jury it's dead now, no tracing's left to say it ever lived but since............... you so badly wish to be dope, it remains in ya sig your like your sex life, leaving a dead site in devastation yeah your regulatin...... better than all basically beating yourself like masterbation im gonna have to end this battle from where it start's man this is only 300....... because you destroyed yourself by battling one of rv's spartans your record is a fluke those arn't wins so let me fix them you couldn't really win all those battles if creating the system |
Ransum has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-02-08 05:59 PM.
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it's so insultin' to say I'm wack.. like my disses to you when they're displayed in rap...
Valor is slayin' cats.. slyly sprayin' facts thru phrases without rage and gats... look where my placements at.. the status is amazin' yes I'm graced with that... player your majorly on stagnant and there aint no game attached... acts are lame with actions made off crap.. u'll still get lay'ed across ez like chapstick... your names a laugh... how ya name valor when ya style looks like its made from cheap plastic... he's in the lane of ass... I'm on my way to fame where all gays get lapped... lastest type of fags that we rag on for days.. with massive drags on they passive ways... I can brag because it's how I be... and you can be the next laid out casuality... casually framed south on the pavement... actually traced around with casings... I pounced down and chased 'em.. those that evaded my abrasive statements... avoided trouble... strayed from baseheads and faced off with the rawest fucker... less or more is nada.. your core gets wrecked when my talk is uttered... spluttered forth it's blunt and awkward frontin'... is a corpse like yours when it's the lord your runnin'... mouthes on.. you is stutterin' nothin' like you know the bouts gone... prone to towels tossed... it's over you've now lost... wits lower than power with all switches that chose off... from you are all hits that just insignificantly blow soft... your a minion Ima dope god.. higher than idiots that get smoked on the low boss... I have a cross let me grope it.. bless the folks that I know and my focus on potent... address my foes with a motive that's more loco than boatloads in oceans... and of course my flow I give thanks to.. I've grown with my form and thrown a few shanks duke... owned you like planks do.. your out of your depths and have descended in ranks newb... it's true that I'm blatant.. ascended at length and you have leapt to where snakes move... shady and fake... tryna get on ten inches of hate because you crave for the taste... you pray to be great.. when isn't it fate when I hold that in clips on my waste... your prey on my plate.. I eat niggas up like this is Rah strippin' your faith... fuck a pistol to face.. stuff the cocked missile to dicks and watch them piss where it's aimed... NOW THATS A 30 MIN FREESTYLE BITCH... |
lol.....wow all that for nothing.....couldnt keep it fair and spit 10?
lol ok.....upping number 1 |
Voted For: Valor
Ransum - You have some good multis, but thats all that you got going for you, your going on about a bunch of nothing. No real punches, just slight disses. No personals, nothing that would give me the inclination that you beat him. Not to mention the pointless length of your verse. Quality over quantity brother. Valor - short and sweet, nice personals in this, rhymes are weak. I think its ucky your battling a non established text battler, cause you would get squashed against someone thats been doing it for a while. You could of set your punches up better, but you actually have punches. Which is why you win. kthnxbye |
valor you didnt tell me to write 10 lines...
you been here long enough to know to set bar count to follow and since you didnt i thought you was going to drop as many as you can in 30 min which i did... shit i would of focus more on hard hit in that case.... fucking bitch... whatever man but thats u'r fult thou.... |
Voted For: Valor
you won diz my nigga, he had much more lines the you but u hit him wit da punchlines in the lil verse that u had "you so badly wish you dope, it remains in a sig" THAT SHYT WAZ HOT |
Voted For: Valor
cleaner verse was...was deff better...and plus ransum is a biter |
Voted For: Ransum
ransum.. hands down.. lol.. better overall verse period |
didnt know rans was sposed to write 10 lines.. it aint say that till i voted.. oh well,, still liked ransums better even though he's a biter.. lol
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bumpin for 2 more votes to close this out......good try ransum.
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Voted For: Valor
Vote:valor/vee verse was hundred times better, better punches and jus really won this by a distance with half the amount of bars.Ransum you seem to jus babble on and on, it was to long in my opinion.Vee you stayed on subject so then ran. peace |
Upping Number 3 For 1 More Vote To Close This Shits/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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