Still got it.
I know I can be stopped, the end is inevitable/
Until then every rapper's food remains edible/ My writtens stay legible/ What im spittin's always credible/ spit and leave a nigga with the mindstate of a vegetable/ Im incredible,, a lyrical devil/ my ambitionz as a ridah grew while ive been an underground rebel/ spew acid and spit shit heavy like its metal/ I wouldnt fall if it was fall and i was a rose petal/ If rap is in the grave then its the night of the living dead/ cause its the only way to get these demons outta my head/ Ive been chilling with beezlebub laughing and breaking bread/ me and Dr. Faust love to play roulette with our legs/ and we dont play it like americans, we play it like we russian/ click click boom, we laugh as the blood starts gushing/ When me and damian hit the club the bitches start blushing/ when a few shots in us fat bitches we fucking/ canons we bustin/ pistols we tucking/ blood you upchucking/ then motherfucker, your cranium we crushing/ bred for war so death and violence is what im lusting/ so my skills with the pen is ill and disgusting/ they say the road up and down are one in the same/ so on my way up I might just put a blade in your brain/ Ill be bleeding till the day my blood dries in my veins/ my demise will make the sky's cry lava on your brain/ me being lame is insane and absurd/ cause like american history x ill make you bite the curb/ |
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Damn Shit really hasnt changed. Uppin for votes.
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Nice Concept...I want to use a couple of these bars. for the 300 Collabo.
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no doubt pimpin good looks. still uppin for feed
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good piece keep postin flow seemed on point and wordplay was basic but good keep it up
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Good looks pimpin. Still uppin
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Uppin
:shoot: fucking rapverse |
i liked it mann good piece. nice flow and good word choice. keep it up man lookin forward to sum more pices frm u
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On the right track i think it couldve been better but it was cool!
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it was good...keep it up
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