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Young Fear 07-12-07 11:08 PM

Still got it.
 
I know I can be stopped, the end is inevitable/
Until then every rapper's food remains edible/
My writtens stay legible/
What im spittin's always credible/
spit and leave a nigga with the mindstate of a vegetable/
Im incredible,, a lyrical devil/
my ambitionz as a ridah grew while ive been an underground rebel/
spew acid and spit shit heavy like its metal/
I wouldnt fall if it was fall and i was a rose petal/
If rap is in the grave then its the night of the living dead/
cause its the only way to get these demons outta my head/
Ive been chilling with beezlebub laughing and breaking bread/
me and Dr. Faust love to play roulette with our legs/
and we dont play it like americans, we play it like we russian/
click click boom, we laugh as the blood starts gushing/
When me and damian hit the club the bitches start blushing/
when a few shots in us fat bitches we fucking/
canons we bustin/
pistols we tucking/
blood you upchucking/
then motherfucker, your cranium we crushing/
bred for war so death and violence is what im lusting/
so my skills with the pen is ill and disgusting/
they say the road up and down are one in the same/
so on my way up I might just put a blade in your brain/
Ill be bleeding till the day my blood dries in my veins/
my demise will make the sky's cry lava on your brain/
me being lame is insane and absurd/
cause like american history x ill make you bite the curb/

Young Fear 07-12-07 11:09 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3175458



http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3175462


Now give me some feedback goddamnit

Young Fear 07-13-07 10:36 AM

Damn Shit really hasnt changed. Uppin for votes.

Valiant 07-13-07 03:01 PM

Nice Concept...I want to use a couple of these bars. for the 300 Collabo.

Young Fear 07-14-07 07:21 AM

no doubt pimpin good looks. still uppin for feed

allikwarawkilla 07-14-07 10:40 PM

good piece keep postin flow seemed on point and wordplay was basic but good keep it up

Young Fear 07-15-07 12:52 PM

Good looks pimpin. Still uppin

Young Fear 07-16-07 07:18 AM

Uppin
:shoot: fucking rapverse

deluzional 07-18-07 04:06 PM

i liked it mann good piece. nice flow and good word choice. keep it up man lookin forward to sum more pices frm u

MC Puff 07-24-07 08:40 PM

On the right track i think it couldve been better but it was cool!

Lil White 07-29-07 02:22 AM

it was good...keep it up


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