circle of life...
 

an angel...
wit a clipped wing...
stares in tha mirror...
only one tear drops...

a demon...
rises...
and collects a halo...

one soul torn two ways...

which way...
should i go...
in order to live...
peacefully...
for all eternity...

one way leads to tha other...

no way out...
only one way in...
split into millions...

but only one messenger...
who walks silently...
on shadows...
pray on his victims souls...

thus...
we only find ourselves...
caught in the...

circle of life...

uppin...

uppin again, this is my new one...

hello???????????

besides having a title that reminds me of the lion king it isn't too bad.

unbelievable...

i went back to up this cause i only got some weak ass reply, so please don't yell at me...

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my opinion


anyways

the wing clipped was my visual because i recently saw a picture of a lil gurl angel with tattered wings and i used her as teh character in this peice

you wrote well
short breif stanzas

i loved the theme and i belive the title did throw people offf being theres so many poems written on teh circle of life

good drop
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