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frozen with heat 10-22-03 03:38 PM

frozen with heat V Jai Blaize
 
yo
i set up
u spit first
10 lines max
8 lines min
no bitchin
mno d/r votes
no crew votes



those wer the rules in bitch slapped

im keyin my verse at the same time though so i wont be droppin long after u

frozen with heat 10-22-03 05:39 PM

uppin for this cat to spit.............................................. .........JAi laze..............................

frozen with heat 10-22-03 06:50 PM

if u ever gonna spit, then i'll respon the nxt time im on................................................ .................................

Jai Blaize 10-23-03 02:32 PM

sorry, jus now seein this thread, i'll drop suntin in the next 40, im a T.A. (teacher's aid) this period so im busy as of now...

Jai Blaize 10-23-03 02:53 PM

Left frozen wit heat, kid please find another slogan
Put yu on death's bed, thats the only reason yu in The Omen
Rap potioned, left drunken on shit that really pulls tricks
Checked ya battle, I already know I dont have to worry bout fists (punches)
Yu dont have them, so its me leavin the cuts and bruises
Gotchu by the head, piss me off & yu'll be the one losen it
Surpassed Turbulence; urgent warnings say im spittin wildfires
Flowz is wet from my charisma; they need to be placed in tha dryer
Im tired, of tirin myself out on someone not up for fame
Cant capitalize on one-line posts that try to vendict my name

frozen with heat 10-23-03 08:03 PM

aiight aiight, i didnt realize that u posted, but im spit now

im ready to unleash this lyrical demon, on this nervous herb/
swallowin seman, u is a straight up pussy, like a pacifistc verb//

i add a 'L & 2' to ya battle record.. it become spelt out as L0-22(loss)/
you dont roll with a crew, because u ryhme noughts, point never gets a-cross//

a lyrical massacre is bout to be witness up on the mike/
ur style is all bit, like the whisperin in ear from iron mike//

you tryin to make a statement..... but you cant stand out/
even wen bold, you never make dents, like a new stock, jus sold/

im ready to finish the battle, like a game, when im on playstation/
im shook,but not rattle-d, battlin me, is like facin decimation//



c'mon y'all lookin for votes

frozen with heat 10-24-03 09:54 AM

uppin 4 votes y'all............................................. ......................
uppin 4 votes............................................. ................

frozen with heat 10-24-03 11:44 AM

second time uppin y'all please dont sleep...............................
votes....................votes.................... ........................................

- Prospect - 10-24-03 11:51 AM

quite possibly the worste use of wordplay ever.....
i add a 'L & 2' to ya battle record.. it become spelt out as L0-22(loss)/
sorry to have to bring u up on this...but it was pathetic....

j$$blaze$$.....
didn't really like your style at all.....wit the punches....
there really wasnt much to bold in my opinion to begin wit...

heat......
besides that horrible line the rest was pretty decent, wit ok punches....
stop wit the // after each line....very newby'ish.....

my overall vote goes to frozen wit heat....
much better flow and more stable and signified wit his punches...

frozen with heat 10-24-03 01:04 PM

3rd time uppin y'all............................................. .
need more votes............................................. ...

Jai Blaize 10-24-03 03:46 PM

hmm...

looks like its gettin slept on..

wake up... les get dem votes peoples...

les go.. get on point...

frozen with heat 10-24-03 09:30 PM

c'mon peeps, please vote.............................................
dont sleep on this one......................................

frozen with heat 10-25-03 06:46 AM

uppin this shit again.................................. for the last time.........................................

LM 10-25-03 09:29 AM

I read this battle twice to decide who I was gonna vote for. Carsons right we have seen the worst wordplay ever here by frozen with heat. It was a good idea but just didnt work.
Punches and personals went to jai blaize here and his verse was more structured too.
Both verses flowed well in parts but coz of the punches and personals my vote goes to jai blaize.
I cant poll so get a mod to add my vote.
VOTE JAI BLAIZE

FleX 10-25-03 11:25 AM

Flow: Tie
Structure: Blaze
Metas: Frozen
Punchs Frozen
Multis: Neither
Enjoyment: Frozen

Vote: Frozen

Blaze lose the bolds..looks gay...Frozen got you with slightly better punchs..his verse was ok yours was weak..keep elevatin


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