*+*ludacris*+* vs Elusiv G
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting luda dnt take too long to drop. gd luck Peace Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-14-04 at 10:03 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 10:04 AM.
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i sadi 6 LINES not 6-unlimated
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*+*ludacris*+* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 10:39 AM.
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yo gay boy gay boy ur such a wanker//
calling me botha hu do u think u r a wanker banker// u stupied dick calling yaself elusiv G u rhyme lyk ur elvis// ur the no.1 basterd hus got nothing in the pelvise// batty gal batty gal u r wack u slipt wack shit// im drop my dope stuff im giving u a hit// |
yo yo ...time to rain on this nigga!!!!!!!!!
Used ludacris to earn lil extra street cred, yo u gotta work harder to gain ma respect// All u dun is make urself seem minor, a wannabe fan,a copycat rhymer// I shud inform RV dnt like biters, "ur actin a fool",tryin merk niggaz wit shitty 1 liners// I like ur face as the avatar, its jus how i pictured u, this battles over "rollout" in ur car// Cs ur a fake, and ur in ma way, so " move bitch" for fuck sake// Call ur self a ho cos in this battle i pimped u across all "area codes" BLap....this was to easy.....wat a punk....lol |
Voted For: Elusiv G
elusiv won u bothneed to elevate that was staraigt sht |
Voted For: Elusiv G
wow that was a shitty battle... Elusiv~hope u werent coming ur hardest... liked how u used songs from luda in ur lines nice personals but u still could do better 6/10 Ludacris~ok u gotta reaa tutorial or sumtin... practice in the diss cypher dont just rhyme words u gotta make sense plus u spelt pelvis wrong, your structure was the best thing about ur verse...2/10 |
uppin uppin uppin..................................
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Voted For: Elusiv G
Opener - G, that was hard, lol, luda weak Closer - G, Hard again, luda, weak again Punches - G, Threw mad punches, G threw nothing Personals - G, very strong, Ludas were terrible Metas - G, for actually throwing some in there, unlike luda Multies - Neither, didnt catch any in either Structure - G, I dug that structure man, well done Vocab - G, ludas biggest/most tech word was "Stupied" which was spelt wrong... Flow - G, waaaaay better flow. This battle all in all was a joke. No offense to you luda, I always give respect to kats try'na elevate, ya know? Heres a few pointers for your next battle dawg (luda)... -Longer lines and bars -Harder punches -Way better personals -Try usin metas and multies -Elevate your vocab -DONT CALL YOUR OPPONENT A WANKER!! Good Job Elusive, you got my vote because you basically murdered him as you can see above ^^^ Peace out boys, props to both... |
This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
coo not luda needs elevation but elusiv g did pretty well...
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Please hit up my battle with an honest vote, as I have kindly just done for you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...565909&posted=1
Thanks a lot... |
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