J_Trooper vs KroNuz
 

Battle Rules:

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-28-04 at 10:56 PM

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KroNuz has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 10:28 PM.

J_Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 10:36 PM.

J Troop Gettin Rocked, Like Old People In Chairs That Move
You On'a Block?, You More Like Carlton From Bel Air You Fool! (Will smith old show)

It Dont Matta Ya Post Count But How You Make Ya Posts Count
And If Thats The Case N Its A Flow Bout', You Takin A L No Doubt

Got Troop Seein Stars Like Black Lights Lookin Up Ways
N He's Going Down Like Rv Lastnight For Upgrades

My Verse Is Hate Mixed With A Blunt Rage
And Ya Style Is Plain Like Rv'z New Front Page!

Ya Flow Is Wrong And If You Write Right Ya Blows' Might Miss
Plus Ya Style Is Like The New Rap Verse, Cuz Nobody Likes It !

ight let the voteing n shit begin.................

uppin

Voted For: KroNuz

Well not bad this was a close battle, KroNuz you have the wordplay down as well as the muliti's you could work a little on developing your punches but somtimes good wordplay and multi's really enhances a punch which yours seemed to do, you started off kinda bad with the opening bar but as the verse progressed you got better, it seems to me you realy build on your previous barz which is good to see.

J trooper you were kinda like + / - meaning you had a good bar then one i wasn't feel'n then a good one then one I wasn't feel'n the opener was a nice hit then the second bar was kinda bunk so on and so forth. You as well have the multi's down it's good to see makes things a nice read cause it enhances your flow.


Now punches win battles and this in this one it was almost to close to say, both of you came creative I liked how Kro brought up the current event's with the site and all, and J you just had some well thought out punches. However, J your two barz

Geletin resembles ya Interior im established respect ya Superior
Im Domination. U not even Nomination i peeped the fear in You


Neva will your Hopes and Wishes turn you into Competition
Quote my Significance Defenition's-ya punches aint Deliverin

These two bars didn't seem like much of a punch the first one I posted was more like 1 up'n and the second wasn't really anything. Because of that fact I have to say that Kro takes this, mainly because although J had some really sick punches they weren't consistent all the way through. Kro, your punches were average but consistent.

I think Trooper had better vocab, but thats about it-- KroNuz had stronger punches, and a couple lines were pretty funny-- Felt KroNuz's closer was the strongest bar in the battle- good wordplay, strong verse.... 1

This was feedback posted for J_Trooper
 

yo im feeling this vote shit cuz now i can see a nigga verse.damn i hate voting aganist this nigga but he be battleing some hard hitting niggas.trooper ya shit is offical as it always is.good flow and wordplay and your vocab is good your disses were ok but not hard hitting but the way you say um makes um seem better you kinda like hov on that shit.i like your beginning and and but ill go with your oppenants verse again cuz he got more personal and he killed you on originality.still you got a good verse in

yah didnt poll it lol..... uppppppppppppppppppp[[[

This was feedback posted for J_Trooper
 

im not voting, just one comment........................................... ............

J you was the tiebreaker vote against me a memisis and you said we both need to elevate.................................
well based on that verse you just post, if thats elevation.....
ill stay right where im at thank you

^- lol.......................upppppp..............