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rellik vs CRuZiFiYaH
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10- UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Go head busta. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-07-06 at 12:39 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
CRuZiFiYaH has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-07-06 12:40 AM.
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rellik has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-07-06 01:10 AM.
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Aye -
Check the status bitch, i'll leave you cut up in sections... Surprised you can type while ya thumbs stuck up in rectums! I'm begging this cat to chill, before I sever his back for real... Last I heard, Cruzifiyah was pleasuring fags for meals! Nigga, you're past pathetic, I'm spastic, i'll smash ya head in... An after this battle, i'm sure ya gonna need to change ya plastic bedding! You pansy fuck, your best position’s on ya elbows and knees… More nuts hang from ya lip than skirts on Seminole chiefs! Kid wanted to step, this bitch must be losing his damn sight… Attracted to Scots, and kilts, Cruzi enjoys blowin’ on bag pipes! You can’t be serious, you battle me then you choose to die… I’m a Jew and your Jesus…this bastard just got crucified… -Blah, it's been a hot minute...a very hot minute. |
Pull out blades An u Move Fuckin-Get-SlicedLook Bitch im Buckin-Ya-Twice Werd of advice dun fuck up cz im Nothin-But-Nice..!!
CZ When i spark~rounds it'll leave this "mark~down" like a Reduction-In-Price..!! I'm Teachin-Horror!! fuckin with Cruz? i'll leave yuh Pieces-Tortured..!! This Chick a fake so when i clap er she "Dysphonia" Like Speech-Disorders..!! (dies phonier) Pick up the Guage an Ill let the Same-Shells-Clap-Herbs Shots at er head and leave her Brain-Cells-Fractured..!! This bitch couldn't be a "killer" with her Name-Spelled-Backwards..!! I'll Drill-Yuh-When-Sprayers-Spark take a L cz Listen i'm Nice~as~fuck an ur not Iller-So-Play-Yuh-Part..!! an them semi u'll light~u~up like u was Afraid-Of-Dark Cruz u'll have er Get "murdered on R.V" like "killers" In-A-Trailor-Parks..!! U like bad kissin the was u Suck-In-Spits Cz u ain Nuffin-Bitch..!! U ain phasin me cz u like the dudes who fuck u analy ya drops is FUckin-Shit..!! |
Voted For: rellik
lol...tight verse here... he had a lot of humor,punches kept on coming harder and hader...irony was also applyed...he also had some multiz..which aided him to having a nice flow...yah i was madly feeling your metaz and the vocab: simple but mixed with your mets they turned out nu and tight..yeah concepts were clare and structure was gd too...you had a decent verse and unlike ur opponent...he didnt have punches to me... yo cruz...you shudnt space ur bars cos it cuts off your flow...and in a battle dawg i guess you are to 'diss' to 'kill' ...not spit out things u prolly wud neva get hold of...you just make me imply that you are forming(i.e pretending) which to us all on rv means being a kid...a stupid one...and dont fill in so much words in a bar/line cos if it wasnt for xperience to me ur whole verse wudnt have had not even a rhymed line...you really shud learn from rellik...no hate just advicing you! ..wun... |
wat the fuck is this clit ridin shit her drop was ass point blank get the fuck outta here this site is wack man
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^^typical xample of nubees that wunt accept a creative critic
ugh.. |
Haha, chill Cruzifiyah, Yvonne ain't even know I was a girl.
-Uppin. |
Voted For: rellik
Pull out blades An u Move Fuckin-Get-SlicedLook Bitch im Buckin-Ya-Twice Werd of advice dun fuck up cz im Nothin-But-Nice..!! CZ When i spark~rounds it'll leave this "mark~down" like a Reduction-In-Price..!! nerp I'm Teachin-Horror!! fuckin with Cruz? i'll leave yuh Pieces-Tortured..!! This Chick a fake so when i clap er she "Dysphonia" Like Speech-Disorders..!! (dies phonier) eh Pick up the Guage an Ill let the Same-Shells-Clap-Herbs Shots at er head and leave her Brain-Cells-Fractured..!! This bitch couldn't be a "killer" with her Name-Spelled-Backwards..!! decent I'll Drill-Yuh-When-Sprayers-Spark take a L cz Listen i'm Nice~as~fuck an ur not Iller-So-Play-Yuh-Part..!! an them semi u'll light~u~up like u was Afraid-Of-Dark Cruz u'll have er Get "murdered on R.V" like "killers" In-A-Trailor-Parks..!! nerp U like bad kissin the was u Suck-In-Spits Cz u ain Nuffin-Bitch..!! U ain phasin me cz u like the dudes who fuck u analy ya drops is FUckin-Shit..!! nerp Need to change ya structure up.. make that shit like rellik’s. Cus yo shit is just everyway bruh. But anyway, punches were there but you only had 1 good punch that landed and the rest were straight garbage. Keep elevating though. Check the status bitch, i'll leave you cut up in sections... Surprised you can type while ya thumbs stuck up in rectums! eh I'm begging this cat to chill, before I sever his back for real... Last I heard, Cruzifiyah was pleasuring fags for meals! okay Nigga, you're past pathetic, I'm spastic, i'll smash ya head in... An after this battle, i'm sure ya gonna need to change ya plastic bedding! eh You pansy fuck, your best position’s on ya elbows and knees… More nuts hang from ya lip than skirts on Seminole chiefs! decent Kid wanted to step, this bitch must be losing his damn sight… Attracted to Scots, and kilts, Cruzi enjoys blowin’ on bag pipes! haha You can’t be serious, you battle me then you choose to die… I’m a Jew and your Jesus…this bastard just got crucified… good closer Did a decent shit on here rellik. Punches were there, and most of them landed, but there was just a couple that was eh... but overall you came on top in this battle. Punches landed and had an overall better verse than Cruz here. |
This was feedback posted for rellik
just checkin the pollson this one..................
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Grazi Grazi....Now Up this so we can get it over with.
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wtf no wonder all the fuckin rapper on this site suck..1 u can have the win ban me or sumnthin this site is wack
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Aye chill with it man. Haha, don't be a sore loser, just be cool.
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Voted For: rellik
neither verses hit very hard but my vote goes to rellik cruzifiyah u need to change ur structure cuz ur shit was hard to read,didnt have many hard hittin lines either Best Lines: Rellik: You pansy fuck, your best position’s on ya elbows and knees… More nuts hang from ya lip than skirts on Seminole chiefs! Cruzifiyah: Pick up the Guage an Ill let the Same-Shells-Clap-Herbs Shots at er head and leave her Brain-Cells-Fractured..!! This bitch couldn't be a "killer" with her Name-Spelled-Backwards..!! |
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