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blineye 01-23-04 11:01 AM

blineye ~vs.~ Sm0e Ki
 
you know the rules iaght due wheni get out of school iaght PEACE~2u~

blineye 01-23-04 11:02 AM

yo............. it must be 5 barz or more iaght no less than 5 barz that is lol

blineye 01-23-04 11:12 AM

yo look this guys name is Sm0e Ki so i must have already put him out/
i smoke his ass juss like the grass and burn him till he shouts (ouch!)//1

mutha fuck always wishin he could be like me the best/
but no matter how hard he tries he wides up losein like the rest//2

his mouth must smell so bad from all this shit that he talks/
goin around to every dog lookin for the shit that will give him his walk//3

you should just give up cuz you lost your touch/
and you lost this match from the begining patch//4

so let me sum this up for brake it down make it a lot simpler/
no matter the way you walk, talk, smoke, or toke, you'll choke and pop like you pimples//5

this was mad weak but hey it only took me like fuckin 3 mins to do and i am in schol and can not consintrate AND I AM WITE LOL! juss playin around iaght PEACE~2u and good luck! you are gunna need it !lol!

Sm0e Ki 01-23-04 11:51 AM

lol... it's a comical verse! LMFAO!!!

yo, you shuld just say due by 2:00 eastern time though lol...

anywayz... check!

g'luck homie!

PEACE!!!
~1~

Sm0e Ki 01-23-04 12:00 PM

look, we call you blindeye cuz i stabbed-one/
cuz u thought chu could talk slick holdin a cap-gun//1

you were wrong, and you paid tha price, bitch-suffer/
ya girl gives dome to so many cats she's like a dick-buffer//2

scrawny lil white boy tryna be like me,-walk,-talk,-an-ack,-like-a-G/
you get caulked,-chalked-and-smacked-like-a-flea//3

bow down to tha kid like im tha Wes Connection/
my lyrics to "mattie's beatz" blow thu ya vest-&-chest-son//4 (our friend matt)

ion needa finisher here's an extra bar jus to meet tha quota/
cuz my werds busted ya good optic after it saw um and swoll-up//5

:D

g'luck homie!

PEACE!!!
~1~

Fo-Real 01-23-04 12:04 PM

smoke clearly won better punches his rhymes werent played better flow and better structre cand blindeye you need to elavate but good battle not to bad yo hit up
Fo-Real vs. Pictureperfect2
and
Fo-Real vs. C.Quip
sorry no link

Kautious 01-23-04 01:56 PM

this was weak..... i think smokie won this though
he had some wat wordplay and ok punches

bline eye your flow was off bu alot and i was n't catching your its or our verse at that

Kautious 01-23-04 01:57 PM

o yea and hit this up please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107921

Young Savage 01-23-04 02:08 PM

This was a weak battle...but smokie got this easy...better all around verse

vote-smokie

can you return the favor and hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109012

It 01-23-04 03:41 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Kautious
this was weak..... i think smokie won this though
he had some wat wordplay and ok punches

bline eye your flow was off bu alot and i was n't catching your its or our verse at that


yea word one sided..........................nice flow from smoke......
vote/smoke..............................overall better battle verse
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AKA Idol Warrior 01-23-04 04:06 PM

Vote/Smoke Ki....... Just all round better rhymin, better structure.

Peace

SyaNidal 01-23-04 04:29 PM

vote-blin eye better flow and punches...
both verses were whack as shit...
smoe ki ya used a line no one understood
even with the explanation... use rb related
personals....
my vote-Blin Eye hit up my battles n open mics in sig\/
Pz...
_-SyaNidal-_

Hitta 01-23-04 04:33 PM

ighttt smoke took this had better punches and flowed a little better..........but nice battle.....
my vote-SMOEKI
yo hitt this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108844

blineye 01-23-04 08:48 PM

iaght thas koo i no you gunna win dawg i was juss doin this shit cuz i was bord durin mid-terms and had nothin to do but i ain't complainin your shit was clean and nice now matter what these fools say you know iaght well uppin for votes and PEACE~2ALL AND TO ALL A GOOD LYFE~

blineye 01-24-04 02:11 AM

uppin for some votes you know lol


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