illuson vs twizted
 

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Check in by: 08-19-04 at 05:17 AM

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Twizted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 05:20 AM.

illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 05:20 AM.

A 44 bullet shell took my niggas life,
Triggas pulled by some young niggas on that white,
He used to fuck with them boys on the weed tip,
They found my nigga dead face down in a ditch,
I saw the shit on the news just the other day,
I ain't for singing no blues, I'ma make 'em pay,
I know them bitches they be hangin' at the Shake Junt,
I catch 'em slippin comin' out and commence to pump,
Been led leave 'em dead on the fuckin scene,
Ballin out and the steam'll make the getaway clean,
I made a block then I switched to the other ride,
I'm still in shock cuz I just did a homicide,
I executed me some punks that deserved it,
They had a warrant for they death so I served it,
I gave them tricks a little dose of they medicine,
I bet them hoes man'll never try that shit again,

this kid said hed battle anyone in my crew
this rhyme'll destroy you
aiyo twizted
see my ass ya can kiss it
every rhyme ya do ya bit it
my words ya cant handle em
illuson
leave ya brusin
leave ya in confusion
if ya think dis battle gonna stop at just rhymes
dis beef wit ya seein my nine

Voted For: Twizted

yo illusion you kno i'm ya home boy but shit you cant win with sh ort shit make it longer

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aiight good shit lets see wat tha peeps think of tah battle n let them decide

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good shit twizted but ya said nothin about me

Voted For: Twizted

Twizted: Was this meant to be a topical battle? Because if it was then this would have been perfect so seeing as you two did two different verses I'll judge it on flow and lyrical vibe. reat flow, and very deep. If I was judging you on a topical I'd say damn good verse.

Illusion: Yours had no punches or personals. Your bst of the wackest was this.
illuson
leave ya brusin
leave ya in confusion
and that was terrible man. Only confusion I'm feeling is why you want to battle aain.

Vote/ Twizsted, for better verse all round.

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lets get some votes on this battle

Voted For: illuson

Ok illuson gets my vote because this was a battle, not a topical. But Twizted you got good structure. Illuson you just gotta elevate bro, I can understand you're new here so just practice and you'll get better...
Vote - Illuson

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