"Heads Up" - Collab with Doomsday and Triple N
 

http://doom.dmusic.com.

A collab between N and myself. A real smooth positive track here. N did the post-production work on it and polished the vocals up pretty nicely, although didn't EQ my highs >: T lol. Still a good one. Enjoy.


Yeah, you know the routine with me and feedback by now. I'm not a leach and I don't encourage you to become one either. Leave me some honest feed and I'll shoot over and leave honest feed on your track as well. 1

this was pretty good triples verse good lyrics flow was on you had good lyrics flow was on um i didnt like the beat chorus was good quality i dont know shit about so i aint gonna touch on that lmao overall it was def worth the download good message just hated the beat lol good drop...=1=

^^Hey man, can't be mad at that, lol. We were good at what we did, but not happy with the beat? shizzle, I'm cool with that, lol. Thanks for the honest feed. Def appreciate it.

Listening Right now.. Like the Beat.. Kinda lack the Emotion at the start, but Its gets better as the song goes.. The Beat could be Raised a little bit, and voice lowered.. You flow wit the beat nice...Your Lyrics were tight man.. I like this Song, its some real shit, The Chours was good, but does not have any effects on it, cant really tell if its part of the verse or what.. anway.. nice track man.. keep dropping..

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trip should me dis song b4 and i told him i wasnt feeln it
trips verse was the best part of it i would say
i really hated the beat doe lol

yea indeed .nice collab here...messege in the song is nice...nice flow on both parts....first dude's flow was choppy a little bit at first but only for a few seconds he picked up nicely ..shit was decent.....second dude was killin it nice shit...yall did it nicely......Deep ass voices..second dude really killed it tho ....flow was fucking crazy. ya both got some unique voices..nice chorus im feeling the chorus.

Wordman: Thanks man. You raise a good point there about the verse and the chorus. I'm gonna go shoot over to your link right now.

20G: cool. Thanks for the feed.

IDH: Thanks about the chorus and thanks or the honest feed. Def appreciate it.


Up for feed and links.

i liked this track.. the beat was str8.. Doomsday- u missed emotion through out the whole beginning, flow was pretty decent. the chorus needs sum type of an effect, i thought it was part of your verse Doomsday until i noticed it again after Trips verse.. Triple your verse i was feeling it lyrically, flow-wise it was pretty good for the type of beat it was.. this coulda been so much better, but as it is.. it's str8. nice positive message, but it shoulda ended earlier, or faded out or sumthin, the chorus got annoyin towards the end.. not bad fellas.. stay up. 1

*listening*

Dooms.....you seem pretty blah in this one. Your dubs didn't really match well either. They were in the right place, they just seemed wierd. I think you needed to use less of them.

Triple......your flow was tight, it just seemed like it was to a different beat.

Chorus.....it seemed like it was being read instead of spit....just emotionless.

Overall, this track has lots of potential, it just seems like something that was rushed. I think if you sat down and redid it, it would be like ten times better :thumbup:™

Word, thanks for the constructive criticism guys. I'll def have to pay closer attention next time. Gracias.