Understatement Vs. Content
 

OK fellaz..
This is for all the............beans? ;)
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Topic: "But they can't take that away from me.."

Check in: 10-12

Due date: 10-15

Good Luck.

would you object if I only used the thread without the poll?
polls give me wet dreams....I mean..bad dreams

Maven your the fuckin man..come nice for the judges...
because they expect nothing less with undeniable talent
so show em what your made of homie...................
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~1~

Cant Take Away (Mind Body Spirit)
 

hmm...my as well go out with a bang....

(he sleeps on his problems hoping they fade away)

in my slumber imperfections transform into military
buddy system alliances
for self representation pep clubs as Jesus and Satan
play poker upon a global
'teeter totter' wagering my soul with clear sight of
the battlefield yet
my stairway to heaven brethern knew he would
win when it became
suitable to 'recieve the offer' saving myself from early
bird special permanent paralysis
reminiscent to a roomey vegetable four flats and
a sunken battleship
I..lone catalyst..friendly sun family moon timings
wonderful im here..
seven sins rotate like solar systems contents upon
my sphere while these
chemical elixers remain my personal scriptures sealed
from distribution freezing
frames since they just dont get the picture

~11~

once assumed falsified acts of divinity had me inflicting
pain to my extremities..
this heart still flows I hope the brain will go eventually
manifested pain from over centuries
Andre this is your soul and its an eskimo but just forget
that it maintains as a non entity
since drugs cant..money cant..women cant control
its only an illusion..
mass confusion for those thought pods like im
worthless with no purpose
besides converses with imaginary carnies portraying
the sad clown of the circus
until blissful ignorance is overlooked and every
nerve just gets deserted
breaking apart from me..partially..too close just made
it hard to breathe...
with new folks..naked skin..the devils within

~22~

(Satan & Jesus quarrel)

So lets be homeless work gutter magic and flood
the sidewalks?!
Hell no this individual displays ambition the final
decisions to side off!?*


~24~

A friendly sun...a family moon...the timings wonderful...im alive
(You can never have ownership to my body my spirit or my mind)

~25~

;) Blaze it Maven

will do man...that was really nice.
I'm not concerned about line limit, you really didn't have to specify it was 25. But I will write twenty phive as well.
I'll try to have it up tonight.

How Will Yesterday's Promise Be Discarded Now?
Something I Asked Came From Lips With No Sound
Mortal Shells Can Teach Nightengales How To Sing
Living In Riches So Before You Die You See The Ring
Of Fire Tearing Gaping Holes In Sentimental Reality
Die In The Middle Of Battle Because Of Simple Malady
Lacking A Lower Body, So I'm Frozen Where I Lie
On Canvas;There's More To It Than Meets The Eye
Simple As Worker Bees, Working For Cs In The Hives
Rebutted Replies Realize Replication In Their Lives
The Cloning Phenomenon Will Always Be Revived
By Unliving Undead, Jealous Of Those Who Survived
Anger With Bass That You Can Feel In Your Feet
Higher Ranks Take The Cake With A Layer Of Deceit
Leading The Charge From Your Safe Homestead
Following Orders Without Hearing Anything You Said
Rolled Eyes Across The Ground, Not Profound Enough
For The Veteran Angels, And Those Who Like It Rough
From Behind The Walls Of Their Healthy Little Fortress
Like A Divine Fellowship, Except A Little More Morbid
Five Are Left, Right From Their Home Of Forty Nine
The Meat Has Been Devoured, But There Are The Rhinds
Which Linger Like Signs With Their Welcome Worn Up
Was Born, Raised Up Above Simple Sick Dramatics
And When Everything Goes Silent All You Hear Is Static

And The Static Will Always Be Mine

edited for stupid spelling errors.

Damn.

Well this thread was deleted. And it could only be restored to it's past state. With none of the judges votes. Which is a bit annoying. But hey, tis all good.

Anyway, it finished 2-1 to Understatement. There was a lot of controversy.

I'll leave the rest for Gege to comment on. Such as congrats and how great everyone *ahem* in the tournament was *ahem*. As she ran the tourament.

2-1 to Understatement.

Well...This tourny was exhausting in more ways than one..
But thanks to all of the judges who helped to keep it going, it finally finished...Everyone put forth a great effort..And the right person emerged the winner..

Congrats Understatement
and Good Luck to whoever runs the next one!
It wont be me!
*dies*

Also see the thread in Emcee Lounge: "Congrats Maven..."