Valor vs Epos
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-29-06 at 01:47 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Epos has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-29-06 01:19 AM.

Valor has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-29-06 01:28 AM.

easy.done
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kid your wack, you won't be able to kill me
on rv your not a vet...
your a never was, and also a never will be
im like a sick dog back in the nineteen eighties
my punches rip through you like a bad case of rabies
can't take me, after a week you'll have more losses than posts
metaphores attack and scareing you like you just seen a ghost

im straight topical and ill still destroy your little week mind
so shocked on my lines your panicking trying to seek more time.
you can't hack this, your wet behind the ears, needing more practice
aim'ing vets begging 'ghosts writers'' saying can i have this
i'll torch and burn you, lighting you up like a lighter
im on fire...
before you can start ill take the win, having you banned as a biter

Your finished in a moments time,
Remix your face more than a Pac rhyme that ya cop online
The truth hurts, but there just no fun in shaming you,
Rapverse is dead and everyone is blaming you
My direct dialect will leave this so called vet disconnected,
I drop so hard on the screen guaranteed to leave your PC infected,
You beat’n me? Even Miss Cleo predicts me the winner
I’ll leave this whicked one with more shells then kraft dinner,
So go ahead and fill your whole verse with shit that you’ll do to me,
Dude’s live’n in make-believe it’s why his crew includes Santa and the tooth fairy

Voted For: Valor

Valor:
kid your wack, you won't be able to kill me
on rv your not a vet...
your a never was, and also a never will be
5/10 - Good Opener.
im like a sick dog back in the nineteen eighties
my punches rip through you like a bad case of rabies
3/10 - Meh.
can't take me, after a week you'll have more losses than posts
metaphores attack and scareing you like you just seen a ghost
3/10 - Nah.

im straight topical and ill still destroy your little week mind
so shocked on my lines your panicking trying to seek more time.
4/10 - OK.
you can't hack this, your wet behind the ears, needing more practice
aim'ing vets begging 'ghosts writers'' saying can i have this
5/10 - Good Punch.
i'll torch and burn you, lighting you up like a lighter
im on fire...
before you can start ill take the win, having you banned as a biter
5/10 - Good Closer.
25/60=42%

YOu had a pretty good verse, it flowed well and had some good punches and personals in there.



Epos:
Your finished in a moments time,
Remix your face more than a Pac rhyme that ya cop online
3/10 - Weak Opener.
The truth hurts, but there just no fun in shaming you,
Rapverse is dead and everyone is blaming you
5/10 - OK Punch.
My direct dialect will leave this so called vet disconnected,
I drop so hard on the screen guaranteed to leave your PC infected,
4/10 - Good Rhymes.
You beat’n me? Even Miss Cleo predicts me the winner
I’ll leave this whicked one with more shells then kraft dinner,
4/10 - OK.
So go ahead and fill your whole verse with shit that you’ll do to me,
Dude’s live’n in make-believe it’s why his crew includes Santa and the tooth fairy
4/10 - OK Closer.
20/50=40%

Your verse was pretty decent, it flowed pretty good and used good rhymes. Your punches just wernt hitten as hard.



OVERALL: This was a really close battle, I think V got this becuz he had one extra line that helped out it verse and made it more stronger. E you need to work on more creative punches your rhymes were good just punches wernt that hard and do the MAX amount of lines you can in a battle.


Vote - Valor


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Voted For: Valor

Valor... your verse was decent... your stucture was good for the most part but towards the middle of your verses and kept gettin more and more stretched but the flow wasnt really thrown off or anything so that was a plus... your pucnhes was pretty good i see that your elevating and thats always a good sign... you best line i'd say would have to be the rabies line...

Epos... your verse was alright... nothing to great your punches was good except for the fact that i used all those concepts back in 2003 and 2004 so they are by far played so that gets you no points... your structure was better then vals aswell as your flow but that deosnt get you a win in any battle... need to work on comming up with more original concepts.. other then that your all set..

v/ valor

upping 2-0............
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upping number 2
wheres the votes
at damnit.damn.

Voted For: Valor

valors text is sexy:love:


Punches are weak from both, but valor came more direct like facial jizz
personals arent really apparent except valors non vet diss, ias a nice touch to the battle.
Other guy has fake punches I.E "rapverse is dead and everyones blaming you"


one sided battle.

upping
number 3
im up 3-0
leys git r done.........................

upping number 4
come on 2 more votes
3-0 im winning this

upp upp upp upp upp upp upp up[p upp upp upp upp
number 5

Voted For: Valor

Your finished in a moments time,
Remix your face more than a Pac rhyme that ya cop online
^eh..wack
The truth hurts, but there just no fun in shaming you,
Rapverse is dead and everyone is blaming you
^eh rhymin you wit you=bad
My direct dialect will leave this so called vet disconnected,
I drop so hard on the screen guaranteed to leave your PC infected,
^meh pretty weak
You beat’n me? Even Miss Cleo predicts me the winner
I’ll leave this whicked one with more shells then kraft dinner,
^eh ok
So go ahead and fill your whole verse with shit that you’ll do to me,
Dude’s live’n in make-believe it’s why his crew includes Santa and the tooth fairy
^no

vs


kid your wack, you won't be able to kill me
on rv your not a vet...
your a never was, and also a never will be
^not feelin this one
im like a sick dog back in the nineteen eighties
my punches rip through you like a bad case of rabies
^iight
can't take me, after a week you'll have more losses than posts
metaphores attack and scareing you like you just seen a ghost
^eh..ok

im straight topical and ill still destroy your little week mind
so shocked on my lines your panicking trying to seek more time.
^ok
you can't hack this, your wet behind the ears, needing more practice
aim'ing vets begging 'ghosts writers'' saying can i have this
^nice..
i'll torch and burn you, lighting you up like a lighter
im on fire...
before you can start ill take the win, having you banned as a biter
^eh..ok

This was feedback posted for Valor
 

nice battle here...both had toght punches but valor came up with much more entertainment yo...more creativity and nice attitude in ya verse...ahhh i cant vote this shud be a tie tho..on my opinion...


props 2 both