"give Me Pain"
 

I'm a rapper trying to get into production as well, this is my first complete beat.i made it on fruity loops, i think its hot and i got good coments from people that i know, but i want coments from strangers and good producers..is it hot?...is it not?...whats good?...whats bad?...how i can make it better?...how can i become a better producer?.....u know, all that good shit...and dont kiss my ass, if u dont like it, b brutal...I dont have time for hurt feelings, i'm just trying to get better, so lay it on me....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/w...suffermusic.htm
"GIVE ME PAIN"....enjoy...and leave coments.....1