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SQUAD-UP vs ColdSteel
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 02-24-05 at 12:14 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
ColdSTEEL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 07:50 PM.
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callin me out...HAH!!!...Crazy this actor!!
This fool call himself Squad Up...he must be a lame!!// A wanna be Lil Wayne...hes tha rappin Martin payne..// Imma disgard of his frame..an leave with no description// Hes not convincin..he just a rat that jumped ship..go ask Pro-Vision..// Watchin EMPIRE is tha closest you ever been ta a Uzzy// Talkin bout clips..if you seen 1..cuz it was a prreview ta movie// ur gangster shananagins dont move me...So I keep screamin who's next?// Im like tha bullets in a chamber... I bring heat ta his Tec's(text)// My punches hit hard,I knocked this clone dizzy// My spit is crack...While he tha rappin.. Tyrone Bigsbee// Fag ur career is over soon as tha words drop..// Imma tell everybody that dick stays on ur mind like Mary from 3rd Rock!!// So I dont know why you even wanna battle me..// cuz ur flows r like a misdemeanor ...mine is like Assault n Battery!!! Aiiiight...I dropped..Next!?! |
SQUAD-UP has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-21-05 04:54 PM.
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SQUUUUAAAD UP!!!
chea, eh fam take it like a man, just smile and lose ya juvenile rhymes, get beat like its child abuse u couldnt'shine wit mop gloss,all that lip get ya top lost and ya flow couldnt even get kick, wit hotsauce u still get knocked off dawg cuz my soldja guns, put a holein one nigga like golf balls man,,.. im lettin you and these fakers get it that im bout to put an L on ya head liike its alakers fitted u mighta been makin moves, but u slowin up prolly nicca think he hard, cuz he saw Grownin Up Gotti u appeal to men hoes, wit ya still dead flows Codesteel n them, got ill heads?... NOO!!! when referrin ya name, i heard u was a wack herb in the game this dumby so stupid he put the password in his name! yo i make ya chick scream, n fuck ya sister like inbreeds but in this league , i'll make ya lip bleed when my punches go blitzkrieg this fool act so gay, ....whAT? u dont say CODESTEEL like hockey this year, ...gettin no play if u nice,... than i'll b damnded forreal just cuz u got super man Pj's dont make u the man of STEEL u goin down in flames, u might as well spit it n burn cuz ya verbs lack viscosity, ya just dont stick to ya words.....eassssy |
+++++++++++++++++++++++++uppin for votes,this was a reall good battle in my opinion+++++++++++++++++++
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP
this was a pretty hot battle, yall both came hard especially for newer members. but ima have to go wit Squad up on this one. his punches just hit alot harder. he had better wordplay and more creativity in his verse. also better personals when referrin ya name, i heard u was a wack herb in the game this dumby so stupid he put the password in his name! ^^^^that was hot, good personal n creative structure and flow was off at some points tho, work on keepin it flown throughout the whole verse, got me? codesteel came pretty hard as well. some nice punches in there, not any good personals tho. multies were lackin too. but i wwas feelin a couple bars in there, but not as much as i was feelin most of squads. good drops from both but squad gets this one..........*1* |
Voted For: SQUAD-UP
squad up took this. wit better flow and punches This fool call himself Squad Up...he must be a lame!!// A wanna be Lil Wayne...hes tha rappin Martin payne..// +ehh not good for an opener, wasnt feelin it+ Imma disgard of his frame..an leave with no description// Hes not convincin..he just a rat that jumped ship..go ask Pro-Vision..// +this was ok nahmean, but could've hit harder+ Watchin EMPIRE is tha closest you ever been ta a Uzzy// Talkin bout clips..if you seen 1..cuz it was a prreview ta movie// +pretty good diss, nothin special here tho+ ur gangster shananagins dont move me...So I keep screamin who's next?// Im like tha bullets in a chamber... I bring heat ta his Tec's(text)// +ya best bar right there^^, that was hot+ Fag ur career is over soon as tha words drop..// Imma tell everybody that dick stays on ur mind like Mary from 3rd Rock!!// +another good bar, pretty hot too+ So I dont know why you even wanna battle me..// cuz ur flows r like a misdemeanor ...mine is like Assault n Battery!!! +closer was ok,b ut its been done before so not many points there+ ok now im gettin lazy... squad ups opener= chea, eh fam take it like a man, just smile and lose ya juvenile rhymes, get beat like its child abuse +good diss, n creativity+ squad-ups closer= u goin down in flames, u might as well spit it n burn cuz ya verbs lack viscosity, ya just dont stick to ya words.. squad-up's best bar= when referrin ya name, i heard u was a wack herb in the game this dumby so stupid he put the password in his name! squad-ups worst bar= u appeal to men hoes, wit ya still dead flows Codesteel n them, got ill heads?... NOO!!! ight so squads gettin this one, no hate pretty hot battle holla back at me |
Voted For: ColdSTEEL
Breakdown... Name:Cold Steel Verse: This fool call himself Squad Up...he must be a lame!!// A wanna be Lil Wayne...hes tha rappin Martin payne..// Imma disgard of his frame..an leave with no description// Hes not convincin..he just a rat that jumped ship..go ask Pro-Vision..// Watchin EMPIRE is tha closest you ever been ta a Uzzy// Talkin bout clips..if you seen 1..cuz it was a prreview ta movie// ur gangster shananagins dont move me...So I keep screamin who's next?// Im like tha bullets in a chamber... I bring heat ta his Tec's(text)// My punches hit hard,I knocked this clone dizzy// My spit is crack...While he tha rappin.. Tyrone Bigsbee// Fag ur career is over soon as tha words drop..// Imma tell everybody that dick stays on ur mind like Mary from 3rd Rock!!// So I dont know why you even wanna battle me..// cuz ur flows r like a misdemeanor ...mine is like Assault n Battery!!! Need/Don’t need to work on:wassup C....um overall you just need to work on your structure, keep droppin them you can only get better... Stats: Punches:610 Metaphors:4/10 Wordplay:3/10 Structure:4/10 Personals:5/10 Multies:5/10 Total:25/60 ------------------------------------------------ Name:SQUAD-UP Verse: chea, eh fam take it like a man, just smile and lose ya juvenile rhymes, get beat like its child abuse u couldnt'shine wit mop gloss,all that lip get ya top lost and ya flow couldnt even get kick, wit hotsauce u still get knocked off dawg cuz my soldja guns, put a holein one nigga like golf balls man,,.. im lettin you and these fakers get it that im bout to put an L on ya head liike its alakers fitted u mighta been makin moves, but u slowin up prolly nicca think he hard, cuz he saw Grownin Up Gotti u appeal to men hoes, wit ya still dead flows Codesteel n them, got ill heads?... NOO!!! when referrin ya name, i heard u was a wack herb in the game this dumby so stupid he put the password in his name! yo i make ya chick scream, n fuck ya sister like inbreeds but in this league , i'll make ya lip bleed when my punches go blitzkrieg this fool act so gay, ....whAT? u dont say CODESTEEL like hockey this year, ...gettin no play if u nice,... than i'll b damnded forreal just cuz u got super man Pj's dont make u the man of STEEL u goin down in flames, u might as well spit it n burn cuz ya verbs lack viscosity, ya just dont stick to ya words.....eassssy Need/Don’t need to work on:wassup with you squad...anyways...you need to work on making punches connect ya feel...keep workin at it. Stats: Punches:4/10 Metaphors:3/10 Wordplay:4/10 Structure:5/10 Personals:4/10 Multies:2/10 Total:22/60 Close battle fam but im gonna have to say that Cold Steel takes it...just by a little... RTF in the sig against J DOT...personally felt like i won....4 people also feel like i won...hopefully you do too... oh and its 3-1 im up..pz.. |
^^what tha fuck....mayne i aint with CodeSteel...I was coldsteel before that group was around...an squad up ...that was nice nigga....next round is on me,ya heard..i hope you can take another shot...haH!...good battle...uppin 4 votes will return tha favor homey!
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP
Squad Up: To me S.U. got this win easy.. his punches appeal to me alot more than Code Steels, nice as fuck opener, and it amde me laugh and thats important, thats how you get wins... Code steel: Well it just didn't really appela to em all that much, half your lines were really punches and there was alot of self glorification, overall it was decent but elevate Vote: SQUAD UP |
+++++++++++++++++++++++++uppin for votes,this was a reall good battle in my opinion+++++++++++++++++++
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP
this was a pretty close battle til the end but here it goes opener: squad up vocab: squad up structure: sqaud multis: sqaud closer: sqaud sqaud gets the win of my vote cuz 1 he came harder in the battle & 2 he hit wit more punches then coldsteel did; coldsteel it was a good drop but u need 2 work on ur wordplay sum more no hating make sure 2 return the favor |
THanx folks fah tha breakdowns an erythang .....Squad up....I can except a lost like a man...hah!!!Child abuse...smile an lose... :huh: ..lol....its over...holla at any one that wants ta battle ...set it up an Ill get back later with yah!!
NEXT!?!......even tho you think Im down... |
uppin for one last vote, good battle code steel**********8
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