Da Vinci vs intensify effect
 

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6 bars
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No Recycling
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Check in by: 07-31-04 at 04:12 AM

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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 02:35 AM.

Da Vinci has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 02:36 AM.

Want to Intesify your verse keep it under a microscope,
Only thing it effects is your Loss column,’n’ even that’s a joke
I.E try’n to set an example of how lose a battle quickly
Put em in so many pieces, leave his alias as humpty dumpty
I caught this wackass herb laugh’n at my “half-ass” verse
(till he realized he was at the bottom of this page and read’n his first.)
See your old enough* to know better so really what’s your excuse
I could write this verse in white-out, a win, ya still couldn’t execute
Cause your in over your head like your coming out the womb
Take your wack shit to U.F, cause here we got no room,
Doesn’t take C.S.I to find why this battle’ll leave yea dead
This verse is keen ta target ya self esteem, leave ya on ya death bed


*= he’s 21

Da Vinci weak, so hes only defense is to snap like a crab
and this battle gonna get "bloody", like da "bitch forgot to bring a pad"

ya punches be sad, i see why u stressin
ya like "shaq jumpin", about to "fall" off the battle in "2 seconds"

da vinci a battler?, so I heard but hes verse looks are deceiving
Got tons of guns?, but ya best shot at a punch is aiming at ya ceiling

ya best bet is to quit now and train with me
cuz play'in in the "WNBA", only time u had a "bitch with D" (bra size D )

Fuck Telling’ me how ur ill, an how ya talent is wicked
the height of ur career is legal grounds for midget's

I’v realized ya not as nice as you say
I searched ya 4 ya ill shit, and woundup wit less ‘writes’ then a slave BITCH

BANG BANG EARLY....


my rhymes is blessed with raw, game- let's take a pause
my punchlines "add hand to mouth", like im "test'in ya jaw"

that last line dont count....
that was for a punchline battle .....

Alright OMIT the last line yall so he can use it, in his punchline battle, and let's get some votes on this, honest votes will be returned ASAP. !!

Voted For: intensify effect

i gota give it 2 da vince..it wuz close as hell but he won it with the line about him readin his first...gota give it 2 u...
v/d
return favor please

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Voted For: Da Vinci

yo both of yaw verses was tight man double prps 2 both 4 real :) ok let me break down my bote

opener:DA VINCI
flow: DA VINCI
personals: DA VINCI
structure: I.E.
punches: DA VINCI


vote/ DA VINCI
return da favor and vote on my battles please

4 real return da favor don't jus ignore me lol

~1~

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i voted 4 the wrong person..how do u chang ur vote?

WTF? I think this cat pressed the wrong button cause he was gonna vote for me but the poll say's he voted for the other guy.

This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 

vincci dumpty and puickly dont rhyme!!!i hate niggas that do that.the rest of your verse was good and you had a good flow and struture your personal was ok but simple a 4/10
intensity your lines are streched struture needs improvement and your punches are weaker then ninncis as are your disses and you have no personals the midget line 2/10 and the ending was a 3/10
vinnci had a better verse write the verse in white out 5/10 he gets the vote with the overall better verse
vote-davincci




give honest votes on my battles dr votes will get you banned

Voted For: Da Vinci

I.E
Da Vinci weak, so hes only defense is to snap like a crab
and this battle gonna get "bloody", like da "bitch forgot to bring a pad"
Period lines r played
ya punches be sad, i see why u stressin
ya like "shaq jumpin", about to "fall" off the battle in "2 seconds"
OK idea, would of had more impact if worded better
da vinci a battler?, so I heard but hes verse looks are deceiving
Got tons of guns?, but ya best shot at a punch is aiming at ya ceiling
Flows off, bars blah
ya best bet is to quit now and train with me
cuz play'in in the "WNBA", only time u had a "bitch with D" (bra size D )
Nah, worded horribly
Fuck Telling’ me how ur ill, an how ya talent is wicked
the height of ur career is legal grounds for midget's
Yeah it's ok, once again your wording hurting your punches
I’v realized ya not as nice as you say
I searched ya 4 ya ill shit, and woundup wit less ‘writes’ then a slave BITCH
Oooo, pretty good if not a tad stretched
BANG BANG EARLY....
Not too early now
my rhymes is blessed with raw, game- let's take a pause
my punchlines "add hand to mouth", like im "test'in ya jaw"
'add hand to mouth... is like testin ya jaw'... nope don't get it

Alot of good ideas in your lines, take a little more time wording them better & you should hav meteor like impact w/ your punches.Flow was on & off

Da Vinci
Want to Intesify your verse keep it under a microscope,
Only thing it effects is your Loss column,’n’ even that’s a joke
Umm can't see his loss column sadly, this new system fucked that punch up
I.E try’n to set an example of how lose a battle quickly
Put em in so many pieces, leave his alias as humpty dumpty
LOL...
I caught this wackass herb laugh’n at my “half-ass” verse
(till he realized he was at the bottom of this page and read’n his first.)
Clever, lol
See your old enough* to know better so really what’s your excuse
I could write this verse in white-out, a win, ya still couldn’t execute
Ok
Cause your in over your head like your coming out the womb
Take your wack shit to U.F, cause here we got no room,
It's ok
Doesn’t take C.S.I to find why this battle’ll leave yea dead
This verse is keen ta target ya self esteem, leave ya on ya death bed
Soft closure

Obviously got some skill, punches were consistent, the last bar being the only one I wasn't feeling.Flow was off

V/Da Vinci;Better verse overall.

Now follow my links, yes you know you want to.

Voted For: Da Vinci

I caught this wackass herb laugh’n at my “half-ass” verse
(till he realized he was at the bottom of this page and read’n his first.)

Damn, that line was so fucking sick Da Vinci. Neither of you guys had very good verses, but Da Vinci's was easier to read, and as far as I'm concerned, that line I postd killed effect right away.

Intensify, you had a good drop too, but not as good.
Da Vinci weak, so hes only defense is to snap like a crab
and this battle gonna get "bloody", like da "bitch forgot to bring a pad"

That was your best line, but it couldn't compete. Good battle though.

Voted For: Da Vinci

betta punchlines on that shit imtesify effect used som lines frm the before battle with som1 i forgot u just used betta stucture and you hit him 2 da head

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