14. MaRVJay1009 Vs. 51. Os1ris
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Battles go up Wednesday, Check Ins due on Friday before 11:59 PM EST, Verses due on Sunday before 11:59 PM EST. 10 Lines No Biting No Recycling No Feeding Only Voting Council May Vote On The Battle. Good Luck |
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u had enuff time da look in my profile..lol
O's gay "wee wee's cum out his lips" more than man from "france". even if u put ya "legs on a MONOPOLy board" u wouldn't "stand a CHaNCE". i neva heard of os1ris im wastin bars y should i even spit towards dat jerk. u shouldn't of join KORV fam,ya wack ass should get K.ick O.ff R.ap V.erse. dont like marv then go head pop off bro,i'll be drivin thru ya block all slow. but as far as a rap career u like a girl who "dont give head",u "not gon blow". os1ris is mad cuzz he go write in his pad but no1 views when dat kid'll spit. ask anyone on rv they'll admit,dat he raps like "50 cent" more than a "lil bit". he came on rv tryin da find a friend,he's not nice ya'll dis guy pretends. his record is '7-8' da mc's he lost 2 were between da ages '9 thru 10'. |
MarvJay is d/rode and hyped to be hott .. you gonna end up a flop.. if not..
Its no worries cause my style's like a Mohawk haircut.. I'm dominant on top Like your bio …your rhymes are plain and simple nigga ..you beat me??? No.. because after this youll hear more d/r’s Saab stories than Auto Weekly You in the U.S.. u confused??..gotta be in Canada for “Queens” to be runnin shit And jus cause you suck off dalmatians doesn't mean you 'blow' up the spot..bitch Don’t got a lot of personals about you…but personally I can always smell puss And im quick to shoot one when I got more 'fire arms' then a 'burning octopus' Amerikas Nightmare??? You got it all backwards like wearin krisskross apparel Sorry Marv…you beating me is like hearing jewish people sing Christmas carols |
marv
O's gay "wee wee's cum out his lips" more than man from "france". even if u put ya "legs on a MONOPOLy board" u wouldn't "stand a CHaNCE". haha, illest open ive seen all tourney so far. i neva heard of os1ris im wastin bars y should i even spit towards dat jerk. u shouldn't of join KORV fam,ya wack ass should get K.ick O.ff R.ap V.erse. aight, good finish. dont like marv then go head pop off bro,i'll be drivin thru ya block all slow. but as far as a rap career u like a girl who "dont give head",u "not gon blow". uhh wasnt feelin it. os1ris is mad cuzz he go write in his pad but no1 views when dat kid'll spit. ask anyone on rv they'll admit,dat he raps like "50 cent" more than a "lil bit". um good punch, but whats the point? he came on rv tryin da find a friend,he's not nice ya'll dis guy pretends. his record is '7-8' da mc's he lost 2 were between da ages '9 thru 10'. haha, aight poorly worded, but not bad. *okay, i was awaiting a verse i could enjoy reading, and ive finally broken into that level, your shit was a good read, had as much of a punch element as possible, since you couldnt really hit em with personals (you dont know him). but flow was off in a few lines. but ya had some of the illest lines ive read so far. Os1ris MarvJay is d/rode and hyped to be hott .. you gonna end up a flop.. if not.. Its no worries cause my style's like a Mohawk haircut.. I'm dominant on top wow the multies...umm good, but dont self gloat. Like your bio …your rhymes are plain and simple nigga ..you beat me??? No.. because after this youll hear more d/r’s Saab stories than Auto Weekly haha, nice shit...thats all i can say. You in the U.S.. u confused??..gotta be in Canada for “Queens” to be runnin shit And jus cause you suck off dalmatians doesn't mean you 'blow' up the spot..bitch [sarcasm]cursing is awesome.[/sarcasm] Don’t got a lot of personals about you…but personally I can always smell puss And im quick to shoot one when I got more 'fire arms' then a 'burning octopus' uhh, wasnt feelin it Amerikas Nightmare??? You got it all backwards like wearin krisskross apparel Sorry Marv…you beating me is like hearing jewish people sing Christmas carols ive seen this line before = played. * ya verse was good, most of the bar finishers were fire, but the flow was not so hot. ya had good punches, but the majority of ya bars were closer to decent than dope/ill. ya gave a good attempt. vote: marv verses were fire yall, good luck to both. -eph |
O's gay "wee wee's cum out his lips" more than man from "france".
even if u put ya "legs on a MONOPOLy board" u wouldn't "stand a CHaNCE". good opener...6/10 i neva heard of os1ris im wastin bars y should i even spit towards dat jerk. u shouldn't of join KORV fam,ya wack ass should get K.ick O.ff R.ap V.erse. lol......that was nice.....7/10 dont like marv then go head pop off bro,i'll be drivin thru ya block all slow. but as far as a rap career u like a girl who "dont give head",u "not gon blow". not feelin that bar too much............4/10 os1ris is mad cuzz he go write in his pad but no1 views when dat kid'll spit. ask anyone on rv they'll admit,dat he raps like "50 cent" more than a "lil bit". nah.......5/10 he came on rv tryin da find a friend,he's not nice ya'll dis guy pretends. his record is '7-8' da mc's he lost 2 were between da ages '9 thru 10'. lol......dope closer...8/10 OVERALL-30/50 os1ris- MarvJay is d/rode and hyped to be hott .. you gonna end up a flop.. if not.. Its no worries cause my style's like a Mohawk haircut.. I'm dominant on top self-glorification equals a no-no...3/10 Like your bio …your rhymes are plain and simple nigga ..you beat me??? No.. because after this youll hear more d/r’s Saab stories than Auto Weekly that was hot...nice wordplay...8/10 You in the U.S.. u confused??..gotta be in Canada for “Queens” to be runnin shit And jus cause you suck off dalmatians doesn't mean you 'blow' up the spot..bitch decent punch........cussin makes it poor though...5/10 Don’t got a lot of personals about you…but personally I can always smell puss And im quick to shoot one when I got more 'fire arms' then a 'burning octopus' decent............6/10 Amerikas Nightmare??? You got it all backwards like wearin krisskross apparel Sorry Marv…you beating me is like hearing jewish people sing Christmas carols decent........5/10 OVERALL-27/50 V/MARV |
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MaRVJay1009 came with harder punches so... Vote: MaRVJay1009 |
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Battle Closed
MaRVJay1009 Wins 3-0 |
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