"Runaway"(Intro Track)
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um.. not much to say. This was a very short piece, but it was an intro so thats usual. The piece had a good flow to it. I could hear what you were saying so I caught the whole gist of your verse. Decent stuff,
keep workin B. |
Thx Man Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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Hmmmmm yuh it was an intro beat was nice, thought yo flow was good, but duno thought u came abit to hard for an intro imo but yuh still good for yo intro homie.
Keep up man, Overall 8/10 |
beat is pretty cool btu wtf is all that shit in the begginning lol
presence was better than usual you didnt sound like you were screaming this time you need to switch up your emotion though overall prety good track ive heard better from you |
Thx Yall!............
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1)you sound about 6years old
2)beat is ill 3)quality is aight 4)your delivery sounds forced and unnatural 5)your flow is fine, gets a lil monotonous, change it up, try a different rhymescheme insted of lame ass rhymin only the end word ish..makes it boring, gd thing this is short 6)lyrics - nuttin new, cool 4 what it is i duppose 7)prsecence is there jus lacks cadence meh, okay 4 RV, i would work out the knicks, change up the flow, record it more times to become mo natural wid it before i contemplated puttin this as the FIRST track sum1 wud here after buyin ma ish... in the words of triple N: No h8, jus realness.... |
Thx...Whats Cadence?
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ur style is solid now...but it's the same thing EVERY time
time to shake it up homie not bad...but I'm bored with it 1 |
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