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Heavyweight Championship: Efusive .vs. Newport
 ^4 votes...and maybe youll be as ill as him^
Rules. Read & Good Luck Check Ins Are Due Tuesday By 12 Midnight Eastern Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern |
check a leck a leck
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v/ newport for not editing anything yet
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^lmao...id delete it if it wasnt funny...
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Check...14...:thumbup:
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NO 10..... this is an oldschool battle... so we stick with 10 lines
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NewPort aka IKnoEvel
..aka about to lose to efusive...and thats a known fact cause even at rapbattles kids are calling him wack ^^that alone would get me the win...heh fuck it your done. You'll never been known, tho normally I'd stop dudes... No need when your success story is as long as a haiku this dude thinks he has a rep, he has to be bluffing hes not Running on Empty...hes just Gassed over Nothing After this battle.. you gonna fall so get ready for a spankin What goes up must comes down...I just described ya rankings Rap`s got you nowhere.. Your too simple and Write plain But someday you'll go far... if you catch the right train You tired of losing, but still ain’t switching the pace of history Fuck it, Print my verse out and eat it, so you can taste victory God Damn!!!! I searched his battles and got hungry off text Dude’s like corn on the cob, more you peel off the cornier it gets I promise...I swear it...I'll show what damagin lines do, If there's shadow of doubt, it's prolly NewPort standin behind you |
Fuck ya skill, Champs? LMAO, ya luck stops here...
& Even befo' u dropped cats wondered how you got here... I rock fear, ya time hasn't got here, took a wrong damn turn... E's been known to ass out like u had ya thong on backwards... you knew this'd happen, hate ta pull ya card n finish you in five... computer nerd dun care if i hurt him..jus don't merk his hard drive.. Ill snap words, you know u aint winning, don't fake it b... Cuz damn, half the fucking planet has already taken E... abusively run efusive through, clean cut no bruise to suface... beat me...com'on kid that only happens when i lose on purpose.. Fa sho, nam sayn, blah, i'm da bestest, ur da worsest... & Sadly, that entire set up was better than ya verses... Ya worthless, son, watch me fucking blast ya fellas... Leave a gap in ya chest so big it'd get ur asshole jealous... |
3 minute key up... game for the humoris aproach rather then the hard aproach
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ANY BEEF IN THIS THREAD YOU WILL BE GONE FOR A WEEK AND YOU WILL LOSE YOU BATTLE FOR THE WEEK
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This battle was decent.
Punchlines- Efusive, he just came harder and wit wittier shit. Although the corn line was gay as hell, he still came wit some nice shit. ex. this dude thinks he has a rep, he has to be bluffing hes not Running on Empty...hes just Gassed over Nothing Personals: Efusive had more that hit harder Multis: Port takes this one. Vocab: Efusive Structure and Flow: Port Overall Efusive had the more effective verse. Port, i expected a lot more, but, shit happens. This one goes to Effusive. Pz. -CJ- |
okay uppin.....
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Um... yea, Efusive came okay, it was decent enough for the victory, although I expected better. Ya gonna have to come with some better shit when I get at that title again. NewPort came okay too, but it wasn't up to par with what he's been saying, maybe laziness or WB, I dunno. But it was pretty forced, as in rushed, it seemed, and while some punches were good, others were wack, which made it a mediocre verse.
Vote: Efusive |
what the fuck newport cheated... its an automatic loss
& im reporting you in the mod lounge for abusing r power so many fucking times u cant delete a vote... especially in a battle ur in |
wtf are you talking about???
i didnt do it on purpious i was deletin all the beef that me and efusive was having and you posted right when i clicked dlete so it prolly del;ete yours |
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