Big Ax-D - Breathe
 

enjoy people

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6898101b749e1f/

beat produced by: Sinima
mixed and mastered by: Big Ax-D


feed links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=245199
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=245092

thanks for the honest feed

I apreciate that man

bumpin

You got an interesting accent. it works wit the beat though.
the intro was kinda comical but it still worked.
i actually like your flow. but i can't really understand what your saying sometimes cuz your doubles are overlapping a little.

the hook is pretty cool.
....the harmonizing...needs work.
i respect ya for trying it but it still needs mad work.

otherwise quality needs some work but its got some potential. just needs some work.

:thumbup:

that end....ahhh..that hummin or whatever has got to go....
in the doubles or whatever that was...

hahaha lol, thanks for listenin bro

I'll work ont the quality and pronunciation better