Ysdat Vs Atticus
No need to check in or anything.. Verses Due before Next Friday.. you guys know the rules.. topic: Distant Imagination G'd Luck Fam.. This is officially the Championship =O) |
check. Good topic. lest do this atticus. Going to be a fucking solid battle.
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Woop Woop :)
... Checking In. Best Of Luck To You Ys. And Word, This Battle Is Going To Be Exactly What It Is, "Championship." |
... Extension Needed.
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extension granted...
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yeh Ill take that extension.
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*roots for Ysdat*
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Hurry the fuck up and drop you dumbass motherfuckers. It takes thirty minutes to make a verse. :shoot:
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Sinner: "Father Forgive me for I have sinned I try to think about how different it might have been If I'd have spent a little time with the Guy To try to find why but I was blind in these eyes that Cry" Priest: Don't disquise the lie you're hiding from me my son The Lord loves you, he died because He's the One Who sees what's done, he's happy with Passion To make Blasphemy absent if you ask him, so tell me exactlly what happened Sinner: "It was actually back when I was only a child I hadn't been to home in a while Go and open my file, I was in the Hospital often The Cops thought my Pops was a possible option My Father was watchin me, strong it wasn't him It was someone I probably was wrong for trustin then I must've been just ten I had to bandage my knee It was damaged and bleeding, he took advantage of me" Priest: Did you manage to see, the person who did this Or know his purpose of interest? Sinner: "That's my personal buisness! I need merciful wisdoms, that's why I came to Confession So tame me with blessin' from my anger aggression I was aimin my Wesson then considered it further" Priest: "Son, what was the sin you commited?" Sinner: "Murder!!!" ........... "I spit the burner and unloaded the clip His head exploaded and ripped till it was opened and dripped It was grosser then shit but I wanted him more dead I poured led through the front of his fore head And all the gore bled on the floor red" Priest: "Son, you know well you'll go to Hell, and jail's scary You can't expect forgiveness by sayin Hail Mary Sin prevail's rarely from the Culprit with in And killin is the ultimate sin" Sinner: "YOU'RE FUCKING FULL OF SHIT FRIEND! HOW THE FUCK CAN IT BE WORSE THEN TREATING A LITTLE BOY LIKE HE WASN'T A PERSON? HE DOSEN'T DESERVE IT? IS THAT WHAT YOU'RE TRYIN TO SAY? YOU SEE A KID CRY AND PRAY WISHING HE COULD FLY A WAY WISHING HE DIED THAT DAY? HE USED TO BE SAFE NOW HE'S GETTING ABUSED AND RAPED, LOOSIN HIS FAITH HE'S BRUISED AND HE'S CHAIFED, CRYIN, BLEEDING AND HURT BUT IF HE SPEAKS A WORD THE PERV WILL PUT HIM DEEP IN THE DIRT DON'T BELIEVE WHAT YOU HEARD! SOME THINGS ARE MUCH WORSE THEN GIVIN A FUCKING PERVERT WHAT HE DESERVED" Priest: "Have police gotten word? Are they askin away?" Sinner: "I can't actually say, this just happened to day" Priest: "Well, after you pray, here's what I want you to do Let the Police decide the judgement for you Serve your punishment through, then if you ever parole Then give Jesus your heart, and give Heaven your soul Forever your goal is just to praise him alone Then adopt or have a baby you can raise on your own Dedicate your life to just exist as a Dad Give him everything you ever wish that you had Teach him about Jesus, make him believe him You took a life, you gotta give a life to break-even" Sinner: "That's all I gotta do to be clear from my sin?" Priest: "Yeah basically just stay and be sincere to your Kin" Sinner: "I hear you my friend, the game's intimidation I seen people walk for this same situation Like thier brain isint facin the resultin' consequence Assumin every Human is full of Common Sense So I owe you compliments, I aint afraid in the least And by the way, he was a Priest" Preist:Whoa wait! "What's the name of the deceased, are they findin it out? What time did you kill him?" Sinner: "What time-is-it-now?" BANG! BANG!!!! Sinner: "Fucking child molester" "I guess god is just a figure of my distant imagination" |
if you dont get my twist and concept pleae dont even let you fingers touch your keyboard to vote :)
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Ys, Im Not Gonna Be Able To Make This Man :(
Nice Verse And Congradulations Man. |
Ooh...ooh..i'll Fill In...fucking Faggots Who Voted Against Me When I Thrashed Tweety... Oooh...ooh!
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damn bro, I was seriously looking forward to this :( *takes win* VE champion!! |
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the definition of C.S. |
congrads fam.. WINNER OF VE??
THE ONE AND ONLY WIERD (LOL) YSDAT! |
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