Neek(0-0) vs Viscosity(0-1)
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No biting,swaying,recycling,dicking,hating Due at 7 o clock on the 19th day of january I'll drop first good luck |
ight... checkin in.............................
so there r crew votes? (but no bullshit ones - right?) |
well, legit ones....if i see somethin like.....'Neek didnt have any multis' then thats bullshit....here we go
This eyeful-neek, is a primal-beast, similar to the one the bible-speaks, every rival-shrieks, when there vitals-bleed!/ If i ever catch an 'L' expect the night-to-cease, time-to-freeze, and jesus make his return VIbrantly/ This pompous-star, get stomped-and-harm'd, only carried 'heat' placing his burner in a shopping-cart!/ I'm truthfully the diligent-sort,killin-of-course,in militant-wars using the tactics of villains-and-force/ only powered by my cerebal hemis-phere, every seconds-weird,its like in my mind the holocaust and Heavens-here/ I might-be-arrogant,but you aint dope or slightly-harion, wouldnt get feedback with a 'dear osama' versed viewed by ninety-arabics/ my structure-is-awsome,you just suffered-a-loss-son,its either no show or forfeit..someone shoulda read this fucker-his-options/ Neek' 2004 |
u didnt have like any punches on me lol...
so i just keyed this up o'well - without ur lack of punches I win...: I got you short of credits, like u battled without voting you couldnt win, if u were the leader of ur own vote-ring!! Your below average, like valve's of visa' debits after posting his & readin my verse.. we see "Neek edits"... Becuz your worthless punches cant & wont phase-me.. mine as well make a "LoCo Rhymes" nick.. only way .... the people will think ur flow is crazy!!! Your heart and line rate, droped like u were spittin eighty he ate his own punches, and threw em up.. and got hit back ^^^^ & yet he still ask's why he spits wack!! Fuck callin this shit punches.. ur puny.. so ill say im on my 11th smack .... give u a bat.. and still u couldnt hit a home run on me!! Ill brace my self up against the wall.. - only way ur holdin me ur rhymes got caught between.. and u fell wit em.. now bitch, dont lie.. dont ask - ^^^ that tells u why ur blowin me |
uppp for votes.... good battle, lets get some votes.. pz
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Viscosity took this
Punches - Viscosity flow - tie personals - Viscosity Multi's - neek over all Viscosity took this it wasnt a home run for him but i juat was feelin his verse more Vote gone. -Axe |
hey yo wow.. nice vrese neek
punchlines- neek multies- neek structure- neek personals - viscosity overall vote- neek Vote gone. -Axe |
^forgot to poll vote..........................
its 1-0 right now.. me |
Thanks man.....1-1 uppin for more
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LOL @ :)... his structure was wack compared to mine
lil dick sucking going on? |
Stfu homo....cant handle an l...fuck you and ur soft focus boyfriends...
Neek 2004....brush off them dickriders |
and now theres NO CREW VOTES because your not going to like me =)
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no shit no crew votes... oh and - thats a dickride vote
we'll see what the mod's say kiddie |
neek - ok structure..........flow fell off al lil..........vocab was good.........multis were tight......metas were nice........had some good punches.........no real personals
viscosity - good structure..........flow was on target.........vocab was pretty good.........some multis........ok metas.........i was feelin some of the punches........ok personals conclusion - neek takes this in mulits, metas, and punches, so he gets my vote VOTE - NEEK yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same...... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105947 much appreciated.......... |
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