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Dervla Vs. ...D.P...
~Rules~ Topic: "Garden of Eden" Line limit: 20-50(negotiate in checkin) Check in by: Monday 11:59pm Drop by: Wednesday 11:59pm Votes due by: Friday 11:59pm Werd! :thumbup: |
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Garden of Eden My heart beats at a greater pace, frustration makes me screw my face I'm in a haste to manipulate this sequence into its place I pride myself as an ace at my trade, maybe the ace of spades And this track i made could be the key to seein this face get paid Indeed .... I'm necessarily in a solitary environment Free time for only myself, no one else, there's no time for them Additionally this fact was once briefly mentioned to me If i so much as bring a friend up in here, even unintentionally Productions will cease, my glorious priveledges would be stripped If I violate the rules, the boss will exacerbate and flip (i receive a phone call) Hey how are you i haven't heard from you in a very long time I'm just producing away at another potential hit ... you still fine? You sound like you wanted to do something I'm kinda busy Wow i never knew you felt that way, you must really miss me Where am i? I'm at the studio in east croydon where i work Do a google search, haha oh for real speak of these perks Ah hah you're dope for real, alright im gonna direct you to the place It looks really deserted but you'll have look beyond it's face It has the dopest set up inside, this building's unique And when you reach and try come in make sure you wipe your feet... Instead of sitting sequencing drums, i find myself twiddling my thumbs I've seriously abused the owner's trust, through lust what have i become? However i cannot hide the fact i endeavour to see how events turn Introduce her to my world, who know's what wonders she'll learn? Upon the blessing of her prescense, i inform her of my deception However my sincere attempt at explanation hits interception The owner stands at the door, withdraws and calls me to follow I've abused his trust in my follwing his rules, I feel hollow Human condition stimulated my minds hunger, breakin the rule he set.... My warmth and security of the studio are gone, I lost because i fed |
Can I get a extension till tomorrow?...busy-school. This shouldn't be due on wednesday, right int he middle of weekday. Should be friday, but w/e...
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v- DP
For showing. |
Wtf did ya'll see the extension granted?...Far I'm concern its still sunday.
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In the Garden Of Eden-I found my true love
Garden Of Eden *Listening to "It was all a dream"..By Jay-z feat biggie* This night in the darkness, 2 girls found the key of life, cause of a poem and a kiss, Both of them entered paradise. Let me take the mic for a minute and tell you this story, fuck the metaphors and similies this coming from the heart, I was 15, when this passion of love bloomed in me, start(ed) Alone in my room with my best-friend karen-playing cards, Mom gone working-2 of my brothers, jake and raul in charge. Moon shining so beautifully outside cooling the heat rays, while 5 kids in a hot stove-sorry, the electricty hasn't been paid. Uh, staring blindly at Karen, I ain't 'ray', I see the boredom- on her face, so I said "Hey Karen lets roleplay one of my poem" "Sure", she said it with a smile showing her perfect crusted teeth, that's when I got on my knee's and pull my poems from underneath. The poem was called "war", we playfully battled, with giggles- instead of war sounds of desire of killing each other until we read "after a long battle, they made peace with a kiss on the lips and on the cheek" She grasp my arms and moved close to me, "what the fuck?" "we have to do what the poem says- not the time to give up" I felt the adrenaline scorching in my viens "Ok"-sweating hard, butterflies flying happily in my stomach, nipples pointing afar, I inhale my breath, my lungs tighten-until I felt her lips on mine, so passionatley, lovingly, both of our chest touching each other, fetl like both of us we're angels flying and holding one of another. "Do you like me?" I asked when I pulled away looking in her eyes, in my surprise she responds "Uh..Lets go to bed"-Why she hides? In the night beneath the sheets' I''ve found my answer, How I Know? We was destined to be together, cause finally after 5 weeks, I felt the blow of the A/C on that night, mom came in and asked "Damn who paid the bills in this house!?"...."I don't know" Quick key'd it...That beat on "It was a dream" song is very inspirational. |
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