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Payn 07-02-05 10:58 AM

Tekneek vs Payn
 
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No Biting// No D/R Votes// No Crew Votes


[COLOR=Green]G/L 2 Ya// & U Spit 1st



Minimum posts to vote: 45

Check in by: 07-02-05 at 02:58 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

System 07-02-05 11:38 AM

Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 11:38 AM.

System 07-02-05 11:50 AM

Payn has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 11:50 AM.

Payn 07-02-05 11:51 AM

iight..check it

[COLOR=Green]Dawg u couldnt hit me wit a punch if i was Movin in Slow Mo
so, "Craig Davis", return to R&B and to Doin ya Solo's
Whats worse is u Know Tho..but put it to use..its Knowledge
u could use some..lookin nappy as a dude who'd be workin McDonald's
no College n doin it for years..but still never Witness Promotions
never gettin tha Notion that he looks greasier than Fish In the Ocean
this Kid should've Noticed..i aint the type to be delivered Fillers n Brag Lines
cuz im a Killer who Has Rhymes that intoxicate like a 'Miller' when u've Had 9!*
Damn..this phony Sixshot revlover cat thought he really could Try Me?
wit sickness in my veins i'm resistin then killin this 'I.V.'!
battlin me wasnt Wise G..effortless..plus tha Madness jus Started
wit tar on ya heels u only able to keep pace wit Rappaz in Charlotte**
Ur my class science project how i gotcha Dissected in Session
plus ya spits AINT SHIT like a bulimic's Digestional Methods! damn!
ya verse containin more forced multis than if i Threw Whores At 'Em..
n then they had that unwanted sex but while havin Two Orgasms
Wit some multis n metas ya style's still more played than Nintendo Games
you'd think i'm smokin O's of dro tha way i'm blowin 'Indo' Away!
--:time to finish him:--
shoulda taken tha Craig Davis approach n packed them tunes wit da Sappy Flutes
I'm Raw, he has tha females screamin "Aww Naww" once seein his Nappy Roots! haha!
its over!
[/COLOR=Green]

YouKay 07-02-05 12:01 PM

im so happy we could have this meetin, but it aint a happy greetin
cuz this weak spittin trip is in fa a beating
aight look skinny home boi face it kid.
if you were 20 stone u still would'nt make it big.
imma do 20 lines plenty time to land these punches.
a land 1 each bar you land 1 each hundred.
you should make an alias with the name chaff.
coz reading your shit's one big PAYN in the ass.
there's an old saying the GOOD die young.
so i guess you'll be around tom see your grandkid's son.
see tek never loose's to this type of opponent.
the type that get there 30 second's early and still miss the moment.
payn will be terrified of mics when my lines-sre-finished.
sever-ya-head put that shit in a "BRIEFCASE", now "MIND-YA-BUSINES.
this herb cant rip me in this battle imma Rip-Apart this kids Text.
I'll smash-ya-Chest wit Sharp-Objects.........................
................... n make ya ass BOUNCE like FALSE-CHECKS.
a dont know why i bother battling ya pathetic type.
u 23years old and in your bedroom fo fuck's sake get a life.
go on da mtv show but da fact iz payn still wouldnt have true flow
cuz wen payn spitz, I only 'CBS/SEE BS' lyke da fu.kkin news show.
Son, you might as well list ya style under miscellaneous
Here's a clue, the shit ain't wordplay if you still gotta explain it.
You bein a dope mc, is non existent like RuPaul's clit is.
Cant tell if your dick or pussy....lol....like topless infants.
look payn ain't shit, I ain't lose he ain't even rappin' right
Damn right I'm an asshole, this pussy ain't even half as tight

YouKay 07-02-05 01:07 PM

k.o.
uppin this.......................................

Payn 07-02-05 07:03 PM

bump.....uppin 4 votes c'mon y'all don't sleep on it

YouKay 07-03-05 07:58 AM

uppin this dont sleep on it ..........................

YouKay 07-03-05 11:45 AM

uppin this.............................................. .................................................. .......

YouKay 07-05-05 12:50 PM

uppin............................................. ......

bdotones 07-06-05 04:11 PM

Voted For: Tekneek

im so happy we could have this meetin, but it aint a happy greetin
cuz this weak spittin trip is in fa a beating
0/10
aight look skinny home boi face it kid.
if you were 20 stone u still would'nt make it big.
0/10
imma do 20 lines plenty time to land these punches.
a land 1 each bar you land 1 each hundred.
2/10
you should make an alias with the name chaff.
coz reading your shit's one big PAYN in the ass.
6/10
there's an old saying the GOOD die young.
so i guess you'll be around tom see your grandkid's son.
7/10
see tek never loose's to this type of opponent.
the type that get there 30 second's early and still miss the moment.
7/10
payn will be terrified of mics when my lines-sre-finished.
sever-ya-head put that shit in a "BRIEFCASE", now "MIND-YA-BUSINES.
9/10
this herb cant rip me in this battle imma Rip-Apart this kids Text.
I'll smash-ya-Chest wit Sharp-Objects.........................
................... n make ya ass BOUNCE like FALSE-CHECKS.
7/10
a dont know why i bother battling ya pathetic type.
u 23years old and in your bedroom fo fuck's sake get a life.
0/10
go on da mtv show but da fact iz payn still wouldnt have true flow
cuz wen payn spitz, I only 'CBS/SEE BS' lyke da fu.kkin news show.
7/10
Son, you might as well list ya style under miscellaneous
Here's a clue, the shit ain't wordplay if you still gotta explain it.
7/10
You bein a dope mc, is non existent like RuPaul's clit is.
Cant tell if your dick or pussy....lol....like topless infants.
10/10
look payn ain't shit, I ain't lose he ain't even rappin' right
Damn right I'm an asshole, this pussy ain't even half as tight
10/10..lol


Dawg u couldnt hit me wit a punch if i was Movin in Slow Mo
so, "Craig Davis", return to R&B and to Doin ya Solo's
4/10
Whats worse is u Know Tho..but put it to use..its Knowledge
u could use some..lookin nappy as a dude who'd be workin McDonald's
1/10
no College n doin it for years..but still never Witness Promotions
never gettin tha Notion that he looks greasier than Fish In the Ocean
4/10
this Kid should've Noticed..i aint the type to be delivered Fillers n Brag Lines
cuz im a Killer who Has Rhymes that intoxicate like a 'Miller' when u've Had 9!*
8/10
Damn..this phony Sixshot revlover cat thought he really could Try Me?
wit sickness in my veins i'm resistin then killin this 'I.V.'!
3/10
battlin me wasnt Wise G..effortless..plus tha Madness jus Started
wit tar on ya heels u only able to keep pace wit Rappaz in Charlotte**
7/10
Ur my class science project how i gotcha Dissected in Session
plus ya spits AINT SHIT like a bulimic's Digestional Methods! damn!
9/10...lost a point, for hyping yourself
ya verse containin more forced multis than if i Threw Whores At 'Em..
n then they had that unwanted sex but while havin Two Orgasms
7/10
Wit some multis n metas ya style's still more played than Nintendo Games
you'd think i'm smokin O's of dro tha way i'm blowin 'Indo' Away!
7/10
--:time to finish him:--
shoulda taken tha Craig Davis approach n packed them tunes wit da Sappy Flutes
I'm Raw, he has tha females screamin "Aww Naww" once seein his Nappy Roots! haha!
5/10
its over!

tekneek 72/130...which is .55385
payne 55/100...which is .55

tekneed wins by .00385 of a point

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Payn 07-06-05 04:31 PM

wtf?? dat shit doesn't add up but whateva it'z 0-1 ...uppin

YouKay 07-07-05 09:46 AM

uppin this.............................................. .....

Journal!st 07-18-05 03:22 PM

Voted For: Tekneek

ayo i gotta give it to ya homie you was aight homie keep it up!!!!!!!!!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Payn 08-11-05 12:01 PM

jus close diz thread up pleaze it'z no point of keepin it open


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