"Rich and Poor"...New MIXTAPE Track...Leave Links and I'll Return the Favor.
 

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Word...making a new mixtape, here is one song that is on it.

Leave some links and I'll return the favor.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224202
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224252

hot track but ya flow needs more diversity like a lazy side a hyper side like mutliple sides your one dementional and ya one demention is tyte but ya gotta step away from ya comfort zone a experiment fuck what feedback kids give merge the goods and bads and create ya true flow.hook is hott tho

Thanks man...

Uppin.

Man, im feelin the song in general, delivery was nice, and the beats dope and ya flow was good the only thing i didnt like was the chorus, but see the chorus its self is good and goes witht he song yea..you also flow it with the song nice and well..lol just 1 lil pickish part i gotta pick at n its at the end of ya verses the chorus doesnt pick up with a nice flow at the start of it..ya feel ?

1 of the links is in my sig, heres the other...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222198

Up and away...

Leave some links and I'll return the favor.

ANSANE...I just Dl'ed one of his beats today

mhmm

beat is cool

I'd suggest moving ur adlibs a lil closer to center...sounds like u have them at 45-50...Try them at the 25-35 range...will blend better with ur main vocals


flow and delivery fits beat


I like the hook


ur still high wit those (H)...but they don't kill my ears like they used to

quality is acceptable to good


lyrics seems well thought out


track seems solid

1

too much hiss on the vocals...prolly too much EQ...


beat is ok...pretty coo...

lyrics are good...

delivery is pretty good.....switch it up a lil bit more though....u stay the same through the whole song...which makes it get boring as it progresses...

hook is ok...i think u got too much chorus of delay effect on it though....

ok song...def. worth the listen

Thanks for the feed.

Uppin'.

thios is a nice soolid trakk....i liked it, overall definitly one of your better trakks, shitts hott.....keep it up homie

Thanks for the feed...

Uppin'...

Uppin'...

I'll return the favor.

i kinda agree with tony, but sometimes ur flow does sound like it struggles slightly, delivery is cool, could use abit more variation still imo, lyrics ok, hook is cool, not bad man, ur improving, keep it up.. pz