Mc Will Power vs Mortem
 

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Check in by: 02-07-05 at 01:20 PM

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Mortem has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-05 01:23 PM.

Mc Will Power has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-05 01:36 PM.

Mortem ull get get ur neck cut from ear to ear!!
mee be named from hear to ziear!
im on point like an infra red-dred--Leave u dead
1 time, spit a rime shit im free styling of my minde,
i dun no u come with ur pree writen-
Aint representing great britain!
Look my flow so cold it got u frost bitten, ur smitten.
Ur girls pussy like a kitten yeh i fucked it wot blad wot u saying u aint got shit, im will power freestyling ill bust ur bottem lip.

Quick..
I'll contract weapon's to shatter ya back...
Spear fact's through ya spleen & cataract...
This Mc?..Will get chin checked, record recked...
I'll change his lyric's to Morty's lyrically da best...
Strap vest's, or don't contest, leave bodie's to infest...
Quick spit, to rip this shit, quick lip's immobilize this bitch...
Cuz' simplistic tip's, blast dick's, & leave will redder than crip's...

Yeah I know that was wack, but I havent battled in a while.

Voted For: Mortem


mortem-man nice verse loads of flow it was nice rhymes vocab was good few nice words u had there its all good punches was hard hit hard as persnals was ok not to hard but they hit good not much bad about it but keep doing ya shit

mc will- came kind of weak had a few ok punches didnt hit to hard stuck was off a little flow was ok didnt hit much ok verse not many persnals none hit anyway ok verse was a bit weak just keep elevating

mortem easy gets this 1 sided all the way hard persnals and punches and i loved his flow

v/ mortem

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Voted For: Mortem

Mortem ull get get ur neck cut from ear to ear!!
mee be named from hear to ziear!
weak punch…
im on point like an infra red-dred--Leave u dead
1 time, spit a rime shit im free styling of my minde,
didn’t really rhyme here
i dun no u come with ur pree writen-
Aint representing great britain!
Look my flow so cold it got u frost bitten, ur smitten.
decent multi’s…weak punch
Ur girls pussy like a kitten yeh i fucked it wot blad wot u saying u aint got shit, im will power freestyling ill bust ur bottem lip.
didn’t really rhyme here

I'll contract weapon's to shatter ya back...
Spear fact's through ya spleen & cataract...
This Mc?..Will get chin checked, record recked...
decent multi’s…punch was okay
I'll change his lyric's to Morty's lyrically da best...
Strap vest's, or don't contest, leave bodie's to infest...
decent punch line here…
Quick spit, to rip this shit, quick lip's immobilize this bitch...
Cuz' simplistic tip's, blast dick's, & leave will redder than crip's...
weak closer…punch didn’t really deliver…

Overall Mortem came harder in this battle and had a
better structure too, Mc…elevate more mayn…

This was feedback posted for Mortem
 

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Voted For: Mortem

ima go wit mortem in this battle. i was feelin his verse more. he had a way better flow n good structure.plus better vocab n harder hittin punches. Mc will power did ight if that was really a freestyle. but didnt have any hot punches in there. did like ur flow either, but thats just me n i dont know shit lol
but work on yall punches thats the key
mortem takes this
RTF RTF RTF
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Voted For: Mortem

yo mortem you lucky mc will power really sucks cause i wasn't really feelin your verse, but i really really wasn't feelin will powers verse either, but the line that won it for me was

Strap vest's, or don't contest, leave bodie's to infest...
Quick spit, to rip this shit, quick lip's immobilize this bitch...

it was kinda hard to understand at first, try and clear it up, but other than that it was a pretty weak battle. you'll get better though(i was talkin to Mortem)

Voted For: Mortem

Real quick..
There wasnt much competition in this.. But both of you need to elevate a lot before taking on anyone good.. Mortom you had better rhymes but no punches.. Not to mention Crips sport the color blue man, I'm in australia and even I know that..

Up ya game.. But keep at it.