*Mine This Ore* [requesting feed]
 

A god of 'Angel demonz', my voice'll 'curdle don'
Reppin 'zero gangsta' till they call me 'murder one'
I 'popped so many pills' became a 'zombie patient'
'World War 3' got me strapped so i 'wrong tha nation'
Leadin killerz 'target huntin', now tha 'search gone'
'Addicted' to gage, a legacy's pledge i wont 'urge on'
'Tug of war' got my hoez on top wit cash wit 'less push'
Under fire by tha 'FBI' cuz my last hitz 'possessed bush'
So quit 'sendin demo'z' I'll stop em 'signin lies'
Spittin gangsta 'mental fire' 2 ya 'blinded eyes'
Ya struck my 'everlastin matches' till ya 'timin shines'
Diggin 'tunnels under corpses' I 'divide tha lines'
So 'fall in love' wit ya bitch, I still 'hold' a 'spineless whore'
'Underground'; I'm dyin in tha game to 'mine this ore' *awe*

i posted feed on like 4/5 drops jus now....

there's no need to highlight your rhymes... peeps should be able to see them or quit reading other peoples shit till they do understand what rhymes and what doesn't... lyrically this was pretty sound... not real blazing lines, but some pretty decent ones... solid flow too... keep doing what you do man

This was pretty nice, lyrics were good for ur first drop betta than most newcomers in my opinion. The vocab and flow was cool, but i kno u can get better. The structure was good too. Not bad for ur first drop, but keep writing man. Please rtf on All I Need, links in my sig.