"A Thievez Execution"
 

"A Thievez Execution"
Direct Link:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/k...ablissmusic.htm

feedback of any kind besides talkin shit will be greatly appreciated. Get Back!!! 1

*Listening*

Beat is iLL. I'm feeling it f'real.
The intro could be shortened a bit but it's not bad. Vocal levels and everything is good. Flow is on point and your structure seems well put together. Delivery is nice. Didn't really see anything wrong with this. Nice drop, homie.

`One.

Good lookin out kid, and i hope you can take my feedback on yer post in context and know i only feedback to help cats elevate. 1

I'ma try to post my verse ASAP...but it's goin' be hard since my mic'z broke...so if the quality is too shitty when I spit then I'ma have to give you the win and wait till I get another mic to audio battle again...my fuckin' dog sat on my headset mic and now it ain't working properly...and the mic part is barely attached but it still workz...but it don't stay in one place...

its is ok........ not to good, not to bad... and you want a spot on the mixtape... idunno.....

PostMan: if you think it's ok....then what is not so good? Also what is not so bad let me know yer opinions.

Aight.....i like the beat......but i don't like the beginnin at all, how you yellin and shit......flow seemed to be on tho, nice job wit that, and lyrix, nice job.....but the quality and yellin in the beginnin iz the only bad thing......overall nice drop
keep it up
return the luv
PEACE OUT
ONE LIFE - ONE LUV

you came in like whoa.. down the vocals a little.. i hear some breath sounds i think.. maybe need a pop stopper...wind screen or something...delivery is pretty decent.. you need to get a little more attacking sometimes..but you carried the why is he trying me voice well...kind of remind me of jay or something.. flow is on point mostly.. this was a good track man.. different than the usual battle style...wortthless like a fat bitch that dont suck lol @ that.. didnt like the outro.. hen it got funny..when you clowned him...nnice shizzle man
keep dropping
peace

i'm feelin this beat.....presence is there, your style kinda reminds me of dipset and jeulz, your flow started off with the first two bars kinda stretched out but the the rest of the flow was on point...the quality had some static and shit in it, your other one was better...keep droppin the dope shit man .. 1

Song was hype, I can tell you're a good writer...emotion was there, but it seemed at some points you were just "talking" with emotion rather than "spitting" with emotion, feel me? Not to downplay nothing, all in all I was mos def feeling it. Good shit, nig.

yo this track's pretty tyte still yo
nice rhymes, punches hold weight behind'em.
beat's grime. quality and production is serious.
keep spittin'
!{~{~{~DvS~}~}~}!

Good lookin' on feedback fa real. When i first came on this site nobody got back. This shit is truly appreciated and is helpin' me tighten' up skillz............good looks. 1

ayo flow was on point no doubt
production was prolly worst thing
u was too loud sometimes, too low at others na mean
it got kinda boring towards the end...u got stronger lyrically at the end but yo it still got boring cuz the way u carried yaself
i dont know
not too bad tho real shit
keep doin u

ayo peep mines too plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89454

good lookin