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SpokenBluntly 05-31-06 02:32 AM

She's Baaaaaaaaaaack
 
FEMALES THAT SPIT most dudes be like "yea yea ignore her"../
BUT I Got punch lines like 3 pointers in the final Seconds of the Forth Quarter/
And IM the type of chick to CHop Up ya Youngest Daughter/
Then ask u if you want SPICY OR ORIGINAL HER BREAST OR A LEG QUARTER/
And this KEYSTYLE IS CLOSE TO MY FREESTYLES SO CALL EM KIN/
THEY CALL IT ASSULT WIT A DEADLY WEAPON WHEN I PIC UP AN INK PEN/
TOUCH A MIC AND ITS CALLED A "LEBRE" ..DUDE IM STRAIGHT PIERCING YA CHIN/ (ask me if u need explanation for that line)
Imma be Honest I don't carry guns cuz ppl TALK IN THE STREETS/
I GOT DUDES DAT TOTE TOOLS THAT'll HAVE U BREAK DANCIN' ON THE CONCRETE/
AND DON'TWORRY IM NOT USED TO TO DEFEAT/
SO I'LL STICK AROUND AND SHOW YOU BASTARDS WHAT ITS LIKE TO COMPETE/
and i don't NEED YALL WACK ASS OPINIONS I GOT COMMON SENSE/
CONSIDER ME A TRIOLOGY BITCHES STRIKE 3 TIMES JUST TO LEAVE YOU IN SUSPENSE/
LETS BE HONEST MOST OF YOU ARE WHITE KIDS
WITH A SUBURBON TYPE STENCH/
just reading this keystyle is making frail niccas flinch.....

easy

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SpokenBluntly 05-31-06 11:49 AM

feed back??? would be nice...

~Tony Green~ 05-31-06 11:51 AM

Shit was hot get on yahoo and hit me up I been looking for a gangsta female rapping but this was hitting I'd give it a 8/10

SpokenBluntly 05-31-06 12:29 PM

Thanks for the invite and the comments...dats whats up

~Tony Green~ 05-31-06 01:04 PM

Yeah could you rtf on the link in my sig

XpLiCiT187 06-09-06 10:34 PM

Better Than Most Male Mc's, & This Was Just A Keystyle? Some Of These Dudes Writtin Shit Cant Even Fuck Witt That. Short Ass Lil 16 But Punchlines Made It Hot.

Yvonne 06-10-06 06:44 AM

ym...yeah this was nice for a start...decent punchlines...but try making ur post a lil more attractive(presentation)...that also counts and err...flow was a lil off tho...just hit on that then u'd be complete...


wun

WillNova 06-11-06 03:34 AM

hahahaha, yes, yes, yes.... us is back. I see u, feelin that drop too, u came out hard and hit 'em where it hurt. Finally sum real as niggas up here that flow deadly. Keep 'em up my gurl.... U kno who it is, holla at me, yup


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