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"E" 05-27-03 10:18 PM

"Prayer"
 
"Prayer"

Yo my veins ache my skin shows scars so thick with blood and hatred/though amongst all tha bullshit i rise an feel sacrid/ we in tha battle of life, in this battle i'll fight, tha outcome? now that'll be nice/i'm on tha path less traveled which means, you'll feel tha wrath of this nigga who'll laugh/ measures get hectic, in my blood i'll take baths/i've been internally stressed since tha war came/ wars here, now we could sit back and see your pain/ so many years on this planet battlin for freedom/life for granted tha feilds filled wit anger no smiles or laughter/ crawled for miles, and captured, more drama for my story life/ but no chapter, motivation got me goin after tha prize/ this here'll flatter ya eyes, ya'll all go down you'll splatter like flies/ I'm wise, keep my head to tha sky, got shit to advise/ no matter what i keep tha dead to my side (r.i.p niggas)/ i walk through blocks where drama often lies/ gun shots, mother of 4 course tha mama often cries/ fucked life is slippin away,got me trippin to say/ tha real truth on my mind im grippin to stay/ back at school i was skippin tha days, now i sit up at night as i drift an i prey/ God help me...

Genetikz 05-27-03 11:31 PM

wasent feelin dis shit at all, liked yo other piece

WeeZy 05-27-03 11:35 PM

Flow was here and there, but some nice context man. Concepts were nice, and you had some sick multies in there. You got alot of potential, and I'm glad I read this one compared to your other. And since I've Peep'd 2 of yours, click both the links in my siggy titled Reflection of Fate and Key to Privacy

pZ!

InFiNiTe_22 05-27-03 11:44 PM

.............i gotz 2 agree with zainy.........this was to simple.......i wasnt feelin it at all............


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