13th Disciple vs X Ecution
 

yea....iight battle goes like this 12 bar max (2 lines = 1 bar) post after i do................both verses gotta be in by 6 pm (eastern time).............lets go...1

Fake Ass Bitch, an online gangster, quick, log off now/
sayin u bust CAPS all tha time, jus holdin tha shift button down/

You more competitive? Kid, I'll deactivate you/
I'll use your competitive edge to decapitate you/

your ass aint worth my time, bitch, u already dead, onto the next mic/
If you was born without a right hand you'd have no sex life/

I’ll have my gat click clack in your back to leave your head not intact/
And put your picture on the back of a milk carton jus so you can face the facts/

His wack verses make feeding hard to resist and provoke/
The best line This Fag ever wrote was when he said "uppin for votes"/

This Pedofile is the type that would buy 5-year-old-toys/
and use 'em to lure in his perfect 10 - two five-year-old-boys/

If ima feel your heat,your gonna feel my pain/
Mental stimulations hittin your temple,will cause your amateur skills to be drained/

ur as simple as learnen the ABC's and and easy to blow away like trees/
i murder keys and the dead emerge to see how this killer turns minor threats to emergencies/

i'm "uprootin" ur "blue grass" roots like sod removal, i stab a spoon through u so these kix get "mod approval"/
does this site confuse u or did ur mom just abuse you till authorities were forced to remove you/

you'll find your "center - folds" when i'm bendin' you backwards like pages in a "playboy mag turn" till your backbone fractures/
i craft words to daggers and stab rappers cause i put "words together" better than "contractors"/

Snipin ya waz easy done in one mission, im the lyrical boss/
Even if u shifted crucifixes u still wouldn't get ya "point" a "cross"/

ur up kid.......spit b4 6 pm.....................holla bak..........iight........1

.........................::boom::..............

aiight....let me drop my son off.....and i'll get this.........................
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iight.........................waiten on 13th................this should be good..................remember no beef.,...so lets hit this off...................................1

aiight.....lets do this............3............2..........1......... ..........GO!



i'm battlin a carbon copy of one of the stooges shit take a look at
his member picture/u said u wanted to battle......then why'd u
copy and paste ur verse right out of poetic scriptures?

i throw punches and personals while u hopin on ur wordplay to
help ur battlerecord arise/stealin ur lyrics off of dead artists is the
only way tupac is staying alive

u say u gonna do this and that to disciple how u gonna do it by
textin over the net/holdin that gun to ur head if u woulda pulled
the trigga thats the only way u woulda gained my respect http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46784

givin me a deadline to post u must be in a hurry to suffer a loss/
ur occupation must be a chef cuz only God knows how many
salads u tossed

u private messagin disciple requestin for a lyrical match/but
x-ecution how can u elevate when ur imbelical cord is still
attached

i'm droppin sodium on ur slugs rapbattles watchin the way u
startin to dissolve/u better contact the r.b.b.l champ so he
can teach ur verses to Evolve

theres no beef in this battle cuz i'm takin this madcattle out by
verbal sedation/no reason for gravediggaz cuz by spittin fire
witness x-ecutions cremation

at a time i thought u was ill felt ur presence everytime u entered
a room/now i'm realizin i this ur tightest line was..


Herbert......take ur prewritten verses and use it on an
unexperienced newb/i been in the game now i'm leavin ur verse
fucked without the usage of lube

u disappeared for awhile went undercover now all of a sudden u
back/u must've been on the toilet durin that time cuz i'm seein
that u been droppin nuthin but crap


......aiight dude.....good battle....no reason for me to quote or
blah blah blah.......let the votes start........1

i dropped 22 lines...11 bars....u dropped 27 lines......delete at leat 3 lines......there is an advantage in lines.....no votes till then....1

what are u talking about?....i dropped 20 lines all together....do
u want me to count them for u?.......i ain't deleting shit...............
1 bar is two lines........everytime u see / in my line....that means
i'm done wit that line...

okay.....i'm gonna count the lines for u X..........after i do......let the votings commence....damn.....



thats 20 lines......now stop bitchin.......i counted it for u.....

hmm...
cant vote due to crew and all

but that was a hot battle...

some played shit from x-ecution...

a couple flow problems from 13


good battle though ya'll

w/e i counted it a different way............................................... ..................
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.votes...............1

okay....real quick....i wanna talk about this flow problem....cuz i
heard it alot from catz.....many emcees have different styles.....u bone or outkast texted there battles....wud u say they had flow problems? becuz its not like everyone elses?....i'm just sayin.....there is absolutely nuthin wrong wit my flow......try readin it a different way........1

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with longer lines like that I know the audio would sound better

but for people reading it without a beat or anything it comes off as the flow not being quite there...

more multi's would help ease this..........

in some bars it comes off like this:

blah blah blah blah blah blah rhyme
blah blah blah blah blah blah blah ryhme

would flow better with
blah blah blah ryhme blah blah ryhme
blah blah ryhme blah blah blah ryhme

ya know...

verses are still hot, it'd just give it a little more effect ya know

i feel ya chrit.........if i gotta change my style for text.....i'll think about it................................................ .....................................1

Close Battle But I Think 13th Got It Wit Better Punches And Personals......X Came out Hard But Had A Few Played Lines And Creativity Werent As High As 13th......
Keep It Up Both Of Ya'll......

Vote - 13th

I Dont Think It Will Let Me Poll Vote But I Thought I'd Give My View On This Battle......