Efusive vs Zarbon
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No-hate No-Crew No-Feeding No-D.R No-biting No-1 lines votes all votes must be explained you drop 1st.. Good Luck:hump: |
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Check in kid....i dont have all day.
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Zar just shatter gays.. they'll have to scrape ya ashes Hit your nasal passage turn it into a fuckin barricade No-one's bearing your shit, but I'm often stunned when In my eyes, your lines are straight..I'm the dot above them so I'm putting you down, be quiet and look to the ground prolly got 5 camel toes in ya pants, pussyfootin around You have zero workplace skills,and you’re a bore did I mention? Beat efusive so violently,life got a restraining order against him And when the net’s down, face it...youll never be popular your so far from fame the public eye needs binoculars Take out my competitor,cause this is about to get intense road to hell Is paved & I tagged your date of birth & death in the cement |
haha...just for that shit verse im gonne brake my verse down/LMAO
i'll post in like 10 ................... |
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ok let me see,you come in like 3 hours later read my verse then write something up..that is such a pussy fucking move,well it suits you well..so wear the name you just made for yourself faggot bitch.. :thefinger |
HAHA, i didnt read your whole verse, i read the 1st 2 lines
and said fuck it...LMAO Enjoy :) Please open ya text book and refer to refrained violence You're so pathetic that critique's prefer to remain silent I could rip this kid's ribs apart with my practice spit And flip this hit spit by heart tearing this bastard's wit Ya last heard shit's outdated kid ya better switch styles It's no wonder I found ya name in Sacred Society's bitch-files Like a one hit wonder ya mad because ya know ya pitch less This verse's a sure hit it's just a matter of which fist I see through your countless efforts begging for attention from RB Contracted the ever spreading virus called "I'm the greatest newbie" Vainless acts of self praise through conscious humilty disgust me Especially from one caught bitting off verses unshamefully vastly Must be thick skinned to have the audacity to step on these grounds Last time I checked Mr.Zabron, I highly doubt rap was a Clown It's sad for a fresh face to stride into a grave where ashes lay Your future in shreads and sickeningly likened to that of Casius Clay Point is this, do not jump to conclusions that you might be great You'll forever remain a speck of dust if text is to decide you fate |
If i could vote it would be for Efusive..I think u killed him with these two lines alone
I could rip this kid's ribs apart with my practice spit And flip this hit spit by heart tearing this bastard's wit Efusive.Good Structure Good Flow Good Punchlines Zar your flow was aight but u didn't have good punch lines my opinion ur sickest punchline was: Beat efusive so violently,life got a restraining order against him And when the net’s down, face it...youll never be popular your so far from fame the public eye needs binoculars Zar your structure was aight your flow i give a 5.5/10. Ne wayz can u guyz vote on this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108934 |
upping for some more honest votes so this battle can be up and overwith
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we need some votes....dont sleep on this battle
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Can someone please fucking vote on this battle please....this is bullshit...40 people viewed it and not 1 fucking vote...kind funny you want people to vote on yours and dont vote on anyone else...Dumbass's
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Umm... Can you say one sided??
Damn Efuse came down on this kid With punchlines that tore Zar Efuse.. ya personals weren't that great Zarbon... you had a pretty basic verse With not that much creativity.. mostly played Flow'd aight.. wordplay not that nice so V/ Efusive Hit this up with a vote... Its being slept on maaadd http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=108823&page=1 |
yo Efusive merked this cat hard....i mean...hard.........ZArbon up ur shit...u aint got no structure....nor vocab.......good punchline by Efusive.....1
vote- Efusive |
jay-nova i think that u forgot to poll..or kaos one of you did...well anyways thanks for the vote...upping #4 to get this shit some more votes.....
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Efusive merkd Zarbon. Nice punches, personals, multis and metas. Notable line for Efusive: Point is this, do not jump to conclusions that you might be great
You'll forever remain a speck of dust if text is to decide you fate Nice. Zarbon came half assed, nothin reallt stood out. PLease drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109347 |
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