Livin Legend vs Alphabetix
 

Battle Rules:

4 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-11-04 at 01:57 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Alphabetix has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 01:38 AM.

Livin Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 01:40 AM.

one squeeze of the trigger will have u "lean-back"
heater put 4 slugz in ya jersey like brett farve from "green-pack"
i know i'm to hot to be ignored so u "challenged-me"
but i'm gonna burn u quicker then a "calo-rie"
heater alphabatize ya body parts in "or-der"
punchlines hit harder then them hurricanes in "flor-ida"
the odds of u beating me will never "happ-en"
u got a better 'chance of changing the world' like eric "clap-ton"


1.)"heater put 4 slugz in ya jersey like brett farve from "green-pack" (I ABBREV. THE PACKERS FULL NAME)
2.)"u got a better 'chance of changing the world' like eric "clap-ton" (COUNTRY SINGER WHO MADE A SONG CALLED "CHANGE THE WORLD")

Damn right this root be a legend nobody else drops that wack,
You'll forever b remembered on RV for not having one punch 2 made contact,
Called you a root /\ Damn right!! You ain't skilled enough to be a herb
Cause I could drop a no-show flow, and you'd still suffer defeat with a merk
Trick tried to pay his dues, but RV don't take no shit on layaway,
Ain't nobody pay a penny for ya thoughs, just pull an MJ and fadaway
Nobody got time for wack rhymes, they lend you an ear, it's from Mr. Potatohead
Shoulda put win at one vote, no joke, no folks posts when they see your name in the thread

Damn right this ROOT be a legend nobody else drops that wack,
You'll forever b remembered on RV for not having one punch 2 made contact,
Called you a root /\ Damn right!! You ain't skilled enough to be a herb
Cause I could drop a no-show flow, and you'd still suffer defeat with a merk
Trick tried to pay his dues, but RV don't take no shit on layaway,
Ain't nobody pay a penny for ya thoughs, just pull an MJ and fadaway
Nobody got time for wack rhymes, they lend you an ear, it's from Mr. Potatohead
Shoulda put win at one vote, no joke, no folks posts when they see your name in the thread

Damn right this ROOT be a legend nobody else drops that wack,
You'll forever b remembered on RV for not having one punch 2 made contact,
Called you a root /\ Damn right!! You ain't skilled enough to be a herb
Cause I could drop a no-show flow, and you'd still suffer defeat with a merk
Trick tried to pay his dues, but RV don't take no shit on layaway,
Ain't nobody pay a penny for ya thoughs, just pull an MJ and fadaway
Nobody got time for wack rhymes, they lend you an ear, it's from Mr. Potatohead
Shoulda put the win at1 vote,no joke,no folks posts when your names in the thread

uppin

uppin

Voted For: Livin Legend

Aight, Legend Took This..

Structure, Punches, Metas An Wordplay Were More Complex Than His Oppenent..

Yo ALPHA, Step Ya Game Up My Nigguh, Hit Harder Punches n Experiment With Diffrnt Styles, Trynna Addin Humour An Jokes In Ya Rhymes..

Both Keep Elevatin (No Hate)

Return The Favor

P E A C E

Voted For: Alphabetix

decent battle.

both threw some decent punches.

l.l. you need to get rid of that slash in the middle of your rhymes.

punches- alpha
personals- alpha.
werdplay- l.l.
flow- l.l.
complex- alpha
vote- alpha.

g'd battle.

drop an honest vote here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147028

Voted For: Livin Legend

NICE BATTLE..LIVIN I LIKE HOW U USED YA WORDS YA PUNCHES WAS KOOL STRUCTURE WAS DECENT U HAD GOOD METAS...

ALPHA URS WAS HOT 2 BUT LIVIN CAME HARDER...
GOOD SHIT BOTH OF YALL

Voted For: Livin Legend

Livin Legend
had nice flow good structure had wordplay
and sum nice punches overall good verse


Alphabetix
change ur structure will help flow also use more
wordplay , vocab, n metas 2 help ur punches
n u'll be tight

vote honestly on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

uppin

This was feedback posted for Alphabetix
 

Nice drop Alpha ya straight killed this cat. Livin Legend try and rap about somthing other than gat's and guns and how your gonna kill him, nice battle though to both of you.