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Internal Waves (Keystyle)
.Stretched Out By Matched.Outlines......Distorted.Since.Birth.
.Configure the Life.Of.Death Then Revamp And Rinse.A.Verse. .Devour instinct greater then Yours..Change it til it Becomes.Cold. .Your Wack Ass Rhymes Run Old..stay in focus 'for it Sums.&.Folds. .Stare at The Glare Of The Movie Screen...A Salvation Was.Formed. .Beloved of this past remnant of a matyr Used While he's Scorned. .A Presence of your Eternal Presents Were Torn..Bleak.and.Blank. .Desecrate the newly Coming Emcees to the Plate Defeat.Ranks. .Hold the crown of your own Funeral Oppose.Death..It Stays.Best. .While the sun ray's infest like natural born killers..Stray's.Neglect. .Integrity Questioned the Pondered Actions of Your.Own.Confusion. .Sharpen the Incision with Pollution Losing the Masacre's.Dillusion. |
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Nice Piece...Are you really new to RB...?? lol...
Well anyway...I liked the way u put full stops at were u want slight pauses.....That helps allot with the readin...And u allso have familiar skill.... Anway....Its nice to see a new face (if ur new) being able to drop shit without needin elevating... |
.Integrity Questioned the Pondered Actions of Your.Own.Confusion.
.Sharpen the Incision with Pollution Losing the Masacre's.Dillusion. ^ ^ ^ Dope. Like Bigg EZ Said. . It's Nice To See Someone Drop N Not Need Elevation. . I Was Feelin This Shit. . Multi's Were Nice, Vocab Was Straight. . Flow Was On-Point. . Easy Read For Me. . Ill Content. . Keep Um Droppin Cuz. Return The Favor - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103327 |
this didn't seem like a keystyle...not b/c it was "too good" just b/c of the style...not bad though...u could have used better rhymes and multis though...I liked the violence though....keep elevating..
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yes this sounds played out but, im new to the site..but not new to this rappin...lol..yeah good looks on da comments..
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