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Tombstone & Casket
I always hear people talking without thoughts before speached
Eye visual seeing the obscene before it being seen or reached Prepare to walk on water but you have no wishes of god correct Yet there still in a hazerdous zone reachen for a certian aspect Demies but why consider non existing when you have a gift Crys denied from the mases suicides an extreamly cheap uplift Thinkin if you pass away an fall short nothin will retaliate Sinkin in your own blood now you realise skin shouldn't seperate What you did was selfish so why act apon a destiny unplanned Fuck emotions carried on inside killing yourself wasn't a demand Nor is death able tobe reabilitated so why argue true facts Core of the heart is hard to encounter but use your back It's a hard game a life sweat over the eyes stoppin visual Shit it is what it is so why go beyond gods natural principal Your here for a reason why else would you be on earth Sore mind but so was your mothers womb at a precious birth Coming into this world was a dream unseen so why unmask it Running from your life was pitiful nobody said Tombstone & Casket |
I always enjoy your work...you have great wordplay...your imagery is always dope~and most of all..all of your pieces seem like you put some thought in to them...unlike 85% of the OM's on this site...which are I'm gangsta and you are not..anyway..I think this is good enough for Top 10 of the month..peace...
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good man...you make me think that you can't rap for shit but you can write you ass off.Too many rappers on this site can't rap, but they can write...welcome to the club.I can rap sweetie!
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Penskills thanks for the reply...nominate then bodhicitta
Ca..thanks for the reply...but audio for me isnt set up...because i'm not very good at it, writting is a easier delivery then audo..i feel...and this is just for fun i don't take it overly seriously |
uppen...
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you got skills though, I'm not a hater I'm a reality facer.
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okie....uppen for some more replies
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uppen
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nobody reply to shit anymore?
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Good drop dawg...
You always keep up a good standard in our drops... Vocabulary is always highly consistent... Good imagery as usual... Nothing to critisize... Just keep dropping at this standard dawg... Hit up... 'Treading Water'... Thanks... Pz... |
hmm..
didnt really capture me this piece tbh just seemed to lack in creativity and didnt spark any excitement for me as a reader writers voice was quite weak.. flow wasnt bad.. just wasnt feeling this like i do most of your pieces |
pretty decent the imagery was there...
good vocab and internals you had em... this was a dope piece overall keep at it rule... and hit up my newest... ....Tragic..Death.... and ....Tragic..Death....(II) |
Not seen any of your work for a while...
Good but I've seen better from you. This is one of those pieces which some people would struggle to rap out loud (me included). Vocab was fine, flow was good and creativity was good but your best attribute here was your wordplay. Pretty good drop. Click the link in my sig and return the favour |
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