Trails Of Ink
Glouds Gather To Batter My Feelings...
....Into An Emotional Clashin. Stagger For Daggers Feed To My Grievin... ....Which Crawls In A Witherin Fashion. Glittered In The Memories I've Beheld... ...In A Well Clustered With Tears Of Ink. Feeling A Roses Thorns, My Love Swells... ...To Affection. I Sigh, Take A Second And Blink. Regain Consience To These Painful Cuts ....Dwellin In The Midst Of My Imagination. For The Rose I Watered Will Soon Errupt... ...Rise Past Our First Kiss At Graduation. So I Sit On A Wooden Chair Sheddin Tears.. ...For The Fear Of A Mear Crack In True Love. Has Fallen On My Witherin Heart As The Shear... ...Truth. It's A Feeling I Apparently Never Knew Of. For My Tears Have Fallen And A Trail Is Marked... ...Over The Vanishin Connection We Shared. The Flame Lost In The Dark, A Flickerin Spark... ....Shows The Beauty Of Our Love Is Still Spared. |
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uppin for feed.
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damn nucca dat was a nice joint here alot of wordplay, multis, great vocab, structure was easy 2 follow, & i like ya whole style in diz 1 here keep doin ya thang
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thanks for the feedback homie............
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This was nice man, defenitely a nice drop. The vocab and multies were nice, and it flowed well. I also liked how u structured it too. Nice drop man, please rtf on My Mind. Thanks and Peace.
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thanks for the feedback fam............
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