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Topic - Fights
yo, you cant rap and i think youll cry when i smash ya teeth in,
u about to find out what happens to people that start beefin, u couldnt stand up to a midget and could be easily killed witta pillow, i can battle ya n rattle ya lyrically n leave ya weeping like willows, leave a man fucked up but u just lucky i dont kill-though, u dont wanna battle but behind my back u say i should start-steppin, i can hurt u wit my fist or my intellect cause my lyrics are like a smart-weapon, any fuckin fool who think they can be more clever-then-me, become a victom of punches more precise then severin-flea's, im never-in-need of help or hints n tips from any decent-post, im not a killer.. but i can leave people fuckin diseaced-n-gross, get blown away cause i bring wit me the strong-vibes, flippin scripts wit or hittin you is more boring then long-drives, |
Yeah this was a pretty decent piece i thought....it flowed pretty well as i read it...Try adding some more internals to it...your had pretty good multies i thought...structure was good too...your vocab was pretty good...You had good metas in there...overall it was a pretty decent piece...keep at it...and keep dropping.
and if you could leave some feedback.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86721 |
thought this was average, some decent wordplay and decent flow, but i thought the puches were a little weak, but overall , not bad.........keep droppin it
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yeah my nigga nice drop u had some good lines good wordplay and a lil bet of metas. this was a nice piece. nice finisher. keep droppin playa
holla |
To Be Honest... It Wasnt That Good ...
But It Wasnt That Bad.... Keep Elevatin' Werd |
yo
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verse by verse
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i Tend-Too End-You cause your a Bent-Dude
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freepost
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you're banned
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