<>-^RASCAL vs KeTcH~22^-<>
 

8-10 lines
no d/r...hate votes
g-luck

aiight im in man..
the latest i will spi will be midnight GMT..
ot work in 1hr 30.. and i gota do another verse now so ill be done ASAP..
G'luck..

ok im ready to spit real quick now before work..
gonna key it up now..
pz.

i repeat if u don't get the wordplay DON'T VOTE..good luck Ras...

Les do this, I move quick, ain’t waitin ta hurt you…
Rascal ya only Good Quality cuz Patient’s (patience) a Virtue…
Get Ya Lines Straight, you just a Rook wit this Chess…
& like Tricked Hurse that means I’m Hookin Up Death…
I’m knockin, ya stocks droppin, I’m rippin up ya shares,
& After that, like Alphalpha, I’ll start Stickin Up Ya Heirs!! (hairs)
Beatin me’d be a Lucky Shot, so start Shovin Clovers in Techs…
Member of the Mile High Club…I’m simply Fukin Over Ya Head…

*clicks Fingers*
oh how kind your servin me a win, thanx waiter..
wow your bringin heat to this battle with a portable radiator..
Fuck your Dreams, you Wont Even Be considerd dope There..
Cuz Any Dream With you Rappin Is Really a scary NIGHTMARE..
Im probly sikest riht hear on rb.. hell even the Net..
Bitch Your Like A Sick Animal "Your Meetin With A Vet"..
seriously its amazing no-one has beat kEtcH 22..
i looked at your call-out thread thinkin who the fuck are you.?.
grilin you in 10 lines like im George "grillin" Forman..
your undefeated bcus your opponets aint perfomin..(performin = no=showin)

quick 10 so vote plz..
don D/R..

1 is worst / 10 is best
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rascal:
personals/5
punches/6
structure/3
creativity/5

ketch:
personals/7
punches/5
structure/4
creativity/7

rascal:19 / ketch:23

vote: ketch... better pucnhes, and came original, i didnt see any played lines...

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...erm bye

you got beef, than lets battle, otherwise watch yor mout round me, i dont play d/r games bitch [sorry for free post] ... erm bye

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...weak battle...

Rascal had some good Punches...Structure wasn't all that & same wit the Vocab.

Racal`s best line (probably)
seriously its amazing no-one has beat kEtcH 22..
i looked at your call-out thread thinkin who the fuck are you.?.
(shit was funny...)

Ketch had some `ok` punches..Structure was ok and same wit the Vocab...

Ketch~22 best line (probably)
now people said your good.. there just silly,
you cudnt "cum Phat" if you ejaculated free willy"

Overall
Imma have to go wit RASCAL because he kept hittin' KeTcH~22 wit punches 'n' shit...

v/ RASCAL

both verses was not great but ketch's was more clever cuz sum of rascal's shit was played and it was boring. ketch had better structure and mutis.

vote= Ketch

hmm....
 

Twas a close battle, but rascal just got it.

Flow: I think this was a draw. Both people had good lines, and both had lines that were off beat. Basically it was very close.

Meta's: Rascal got this one for the sick animal / vet line. That was a good line, and well though out. Katch didn't really get nething close.

Multi's: Both didn't really have ne here, so it's a draw.

Punches: Close here too. Rascal got it though, because although katch had a few, they were all pretty dull. Rascal's were more interesting and a little better generally.

Personals: I haven't really paid much attention to the site of late, so i don't really understand the personals, so i won't vote based on these.

Overall: Rascal got it just by being a little more creative.

a yo i think ketch killed this kid with his wordplay and his punches..vote ketch

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Rascal
*clicks Fingers*
oh how kind your servin me a win, thanx waiter..
wow your bringin heat to this battle with a portable radiator..
- This punch doesn't work... If you said "Couldn't bring heat to this battle with a Portable radiator" it would have been better, and Im sure you could have worded it even better than that so that the first line wouldn't be just filler- as it stands the wordplay is very basic
Fuck your Dreams, you Wont Even Be considerd dope There..
Cuz Any Dream With you Rappin Is Really a scary NIGHTMARE..
This doesn't flow that great and the punch is pretty basic but Ill give ya credit.
Im probly sikest riht hear on rb.. hell even the Net..
Bitch Your Like A Sick Animal "Your Meetin With A Vet"..
lol- Ive seen this concept differently before but it took some creativity, good use of wordplay to setup the punch.
seriously its amazing no-one has beat kEtcH 22..
i looked at your call-out thread thinkin who the fuck are you.?.
O.K- it flows nice but the punch isn't really effective, your not really insulting him that much with this line.
grilin you in 10 lines like im George "grillin" Forman..
your undefeated bcus your opponets aint perfomin..(performin = no=showin)
I think using grillin twice hurts your total vocab, there are 500 words I could have thought to put in place- the punch is decent a little basic but decent none-the-less... All in all not a horrible verse, I just think you could use a little work on your punches and some multis in there would help with flow... Good Luck in the future.

Ketch
Les do this, I move quick, ain’t waitin ta hurt you…
Rascal ya only Good Quality cuz Patient’s (patience) a Virtue…
lol, good wordplay here- this was a solid punch- decent opener.
Get Ya Lines Straight, you just a Rook wit this Chess…
& like Tricked Hurse that means I’m Hookin Up Death…
lol, more good wordplay here... Like a Tricked Hurse- means Im hookin up death... I think I mighta seen this concept before, but its clever either way- props.
I’m knockin, ya stocks droppin, I’m rippin up ya shares,
& After that, like Alphalpha, I’ll start Stickin Up Ya Heirs!! (hairs)
LMAO- very creative use of wordplay here- very effective
Beatin me’d be a Lucky Shot, so start Shovin Clovers in Techs…
Member of the Mile High Club…I’m simply Fukin Over Ya Head…
decent way to close it.... This whole verse had a good flow and some strong punchlines backed up by strong wordplay- Good Verse... Props--- Ima have to say this battle was won by Ketch, He had stronger wordplay, His Punches were all strong and stuck... You used some good personals and even some good personal association of his name with some of the punches... Vote- Ketch... Please return the favor.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

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Ketch was spittin bars but they came a little weak, they had potential u jus needed to word it better. Rascal was nice for sum quick flips and got to the point. Even Ketch's come back lines came weak. Rascal came thru and like a champ and show why he has a Ko under his name

winner..... RASCAL