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Magic5 02-23-06 11:03 PM

Mimesis vs Tech Skillz
 
STFU vs. Throwback Avenue

Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 02-25-06 at 05:03 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.


Win by forfeit

System 02-23-06 11:36 PM

Tech Skillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-06 11:36 PM.

-Substance- 02-24-06 06:15 PM

This Kid's Whack, Come See How I Smash On This Dude
So When I Slam Him On The Kitchen Surface...
...It's Only To Show I Can 'Counter' His Moves!!
And You Are? Is The Only Title For This Hatin Cunt
When Mimemis Puts A Blade Over My Head...
....It Means I Made Him Flip Into A Skating Stunt!!
My Rhymes Are Ill, Something That Makes Anger Smooth
Ticket Stubs At Your Heart And Rip The Dotten Line..
.....Just To Leave Ya Void If Removed!!
I'm Ghost Like, Even With Equipment, It's Hard To See Me
How You Don't Get Down Like A Girl?...
...When You Pulled A Bitch Move In KORV3!!
You'll Get Crossed Out, It's Easy To Manage
So When You Box-In, You'll Get Fed-Ex'd...
...Without Sending A Delivery Package!!
This Kid Ain't Shit, STFU Is What You Should Do
Cause You Ain't Graduated, Like Kids With Lists...
...You Still Havin Trouble To Place-Cool!!
I Got The Avenue On Throwback, You's A Problem
But You Get Unwrapped....
....To Become A One Time Bust Like A Used Condom!!
My Flows Way Too High For You To Connect With
So When You Say You'll Give Me A L...
...You Mean The Lube Used On Guys You've Slept With!!

System 02-24-06 08:38 PM

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-06 08:38 PM.

Magic5 02-25-06 12:17 PM

Ha, what a waste of fucking time..

It's like this,

Understand your style.. beatin fags, lets see how you show bums fear
First, I'll put some random bullshit down..
..then connect a played punch here!
WOW, PERFECT MATCH!.. You should really consider stopping, what?!
An extra line doesn't change the fact that you're fucking concepts suck
So give it up.. I'm not a computer genius, but I'm still gonna win son
Because if I give Technicals.. it'll tower over his families yearly income
KORV seems to be a "cool" topic.. let's discuss it with a pen dude
Fuck the moves I pulled.. I still beat out 60 more people then you
In reality my verse was better then Jack's shit.. now I'm droppin this
Cause your verse may be better then Jack shit..
..but that's not really an accomplishment
Seen your league.. Writing On The Wall, your gettin teared and downed
Only complete fucking losers STILL draw all over their parent's house
Your crew is fucking wack.. seeing you fags spit, it's something dude
Throwbacks are fine.. but you dont need to bring back the punches too
You suck, and I'm not going to sit for this shit, so I'ma be rockin ya fool
Because when I Throwback my shoulder..
..it automatically triples the skill you got in your crew

You fucking suck.

Chris Stylez 02-25-06 01:03 PM

Voted For: Mimesis

Dont feel like voting but you clearly had this. Alotta asked for votes it will take for him to win this battle. One line i thought really won it for you was

Your crew is fucking wack.. seeing you fags spit, it's something dude
Throwbacks are fine.. but you dont need to bring the punches back too.

also explaining his style and shit and then him actully doing what you said was nice

Tech you verse was nice but you clearly got outdone with this one. You did have some old concepts in your verses now that it's pointed out. But anyways nice verse just Mims was that much better

winner The Nemisis Memisis

-Substance- 02-25-06 01:07 PM

dawg, don't feel like voting? then why you vote?...

Texxus 02-25-06 01:41 PM

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 
good shit...checkin polls.

STFU and stuff.

Magic5 02-25-06 01:44 PM

Word. Up.

GKillaz05 02-25-06 03:54 PM

Voted For: Mimesis

Mimesis:
Understand your style.. beatin fags, lets see how you show bums fear
First, I'll put some random bullshit down..
..then connect a played punch here!
8/10 - LOL, niice punch/personal.
WOW, PERFECT MATCH!.. You should really consider stopping, what?!
An extra line doesn't change the fact that you're fucking concepts suck
6/10 - Good follow up.
So give it up.. I'm not a computer genius, but I'm still gonna win son
Because if I give Technicals.. it'll tower over his families yearly income
4/10 - OK.
KORV seems to be a "cool" topic.. let's discuss it with a pen dude
Fuck the moves I pulled.. I still beat out 60 more people then you
4/10 - OK.
In reality my verse was better then Jack's shit.. now I'm droppin this
Cause your verse may be better then Jack shit..
..but that's not really an accomplishment
7/10 - niice punch.
Seen your league.. Writing On The Wall, your gettin teared and downed
Only complete fucking losers STILL draw all over their parent's house
5/10 - LOL.
Your crew is fucking wack.. seeing you fags spit, it's something dude
Throwbacks are fine.. but you dont need to bring back the punches too
4/10 - OK.
You suck, and I'm not going to sit for this shit, so I'ma be rockin ya fool
Because when I Throwback my shoulder..
..it automatically triples the skill you got in your crew
5/10 - ok Closer.
43/80

You had a good verse, you used some funny punches and personals. Your flow was good and it was an overall good verse.



Tech Skills:
This Kid's Whack, Come See How I Smash On This Dude
So When I Slam Him On The Kitchen Surface...
...It's Only To Show I Can 'Counter' His Moves!!
5/10 - Good Opener.
And You Are? Is The Only Title For This Hatin Cunt
When Mimemis Puts A Blade Over My Head...
....It Means I Made Him Flip Into A Skating Stunt!!
3/10 - Stupid.
My Rhymes Are Ill, Something That Makes Anger Smooth
Ticket Stubs At Your Heart And Rip The Dotten Line..
.....Just To Leave Ya Void If Removed!!
4/10 - ok.
I'm Ghost Like, Even With Equipment, It's Hard To See Me
How You Don't Get Down Like A Girl?...
...When You Pulled A Bitch Move In KORV3!!
5/10 - OK PUNCH.
You'll Get Crossed Out, It's Easy To Manage
So When You Box-In, You'll Get Fed-Ex'd...
...Without Sending A Delivery Package!!
3/10 - Stupid.
This Kid Ain't Shit, STFU Is What You Should Do
Cause You Ain't Graduated, Like Kids With Lists...
...You Still Havin Trouble To Place-Cool!!
4/10 - Could have been worded better.
I Got The Avenue On Throwback, You's A Problem
But You Get Unwrapped....
....To Become A One Time Bust Like A Used Condom!!
4/10 - Ok Punch.
My Flows Way Too High For You To Connect With
So When You Say You'll Give Me A L...
...You Mean The Lube Used On Guys You've Slept With!!
3/10 - Lame closer.
31/80

You had a good flow, you used some played shit, and some iight shit. Should have came harder with wordplay and personals.


OVERALL: This was a pretty good battle. I give my vote to Mim becuz he had the better flow, he used better wordplay and his punches where hitten hard. He also had some pretty good personals in there. Tech you should have used better wordplay, and thought of some more creative punches and personals.

Vote - Mim.

Daubs 02-25-06 04:00 PM

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 
owned.


polls on this .

Mim takes it by KO.

Kordozar 02-25-06 04:05 PM

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 
Lol Yo Good Battle Yall Mimesis Killed It So Did Tech But I Can't Vote We In The Same Crew So Polls!1!

Ragnarok 02-25-06 04:18 PM

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 
WTF?
Tech came pretty good but was no match for the shit that Mim had so he was owned.
Mim didn't look much like he was trying.

Ragnarok 02-25-06 04:19 PM

P.S. Pretty good metas Tech.

Magic5 02-25-06 05:36 PM

Word. Thanks for the votes and feedback.


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