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technique 06-27-09 07:59 PM

flow ya heart.
 
top competiter, spectacular rhymes shining
got other mc's on der toes with my rhyming
learned from the best, just added to my knowledge
and learned more den i did den going to college
tell ya wot i think and iillustrate thought clearly
think you can touch tech nah u cant not even nearly
You can hate on me its always somet dat happens
but u got beef on tech, watch my soul slappin
spit ill raps till ya feel callapsed. i grasp thoughts
give other rappers lessons taught left u short
spit ill thoughts from from stress depression and pain
i wont stop till i get my point across to ya brain
call me insane take life serious, im dellirious
got other people fearing me, but i stay mysterious
keep my words as weapons, never give u a chance
as i spit heat in ya face, walk into battle wid a giant stance
Gettin girls, daily..make my happiness rise
yer feel secure with someone special in my eyes
i hypnotise ya wid words, bash ya verbs like nerds
i'll leave ya bitch moaning while my flow hits and stirs.

haha got bored.

LPMNDCTE 07-06-09 08:41 AM

This was a descent drop. Had a sorta nice flow to it and was pieced together pretty nicely. Seemed to be more like a keystyle piece though....

anxiety 10-15-09 02:44 PM

Honestly this was awful. Very basic. The lines have almost no meaning whatsoever. Terrible. And don't do the whole "den" thing. Spell the word then.


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