..Anticipation..
 

...i'm doin a spin-off of T.I.P's "Motivation" joint..it'z about time i set tha record str8 & diz is a song decidated 2 ne & evabody who is against me FUCK U!!... :thefinger

[Intro]
...Hataz if u don't like me par, u betta keep footin along, nigga...(Anticipation)
...Hataz if u don't like me par, u betta keep footin along, nigga...(Anticipation)
...If u faggots don't like me par, u betta keep footin along, nigga...(Anticipation)
...Ya hataz can't stand me par, it'z best u keep footin along, nigga...

...If u niggaz want Beef, i'm down 4 Confrontation...
...i'll Freeze Ya Mind Up, when i put Cold Steel 2 ya Head without Hesitation...
...takin me 4 a joke, shit bitch u must got me mistaken 4 a Trick...
...i'm not in a Gang, but luv 2 c ur Blood Drip afta i let my gun start 2 Crip...
...cuz i'm sick of tha Stunts, u niggaz tryin 2 pull hopin nobody Notice...
...when it'z obvious y'all r no where near Talented wit ur I.P sho'in Novice...
...like in a Whip, i Mash Tha Gas & Accelerate on tha track wit Aggression...
...when alot of u Un-Skilled Emcees, jus sit back & b 2nd Guessin...
...half of y'all neva even did a Crime, or let alone even seen a Burna...
...98% of ya get Sick & Throw Up, when it comes time 4 u 2 Murder...
...i pay no attention 2 tha lines, dat most of u Clowns b Spitin...
...i guarantee u dat most of it'z played out or jus plain Bitin...
...most hate cuz i have tha skills dat dey wanna Possess...
...i lay in Anticipation waiting 4 u Bitches 2 come & test...

Anticipation
Niggaz hatin tryna bring me mo' stress...(Anticipation)
Wanna put an end 2 my process...(It'z Anticipation)
U snakes wanna block my shine...(Anticipation)
I got sumthang 2 put on ya mind...(Anticipation)
Y'all must think dat i'm a hoe...(Anticipation)
I guess i gotta continue 2 let niggaz know...(It'z Anticipation)
Suckaz niggaz think dey can take me under...
My problem solva will blast, & leave dem wrapped in white coverz...(Anticipation)


o yea here's my link also: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206217

Damn why arent you still in TT
this shit was nice

thanx homie i appreciate it still uppin 4 more feed it'll b returned

damn this is ok,good deep read..nice drop.

still uppin 4 more feed ...stop sleepin on diz 1 here

to much gun play n misdirected lines...
you'll be good if you stay workin at it

ight i appreciate it still uppin 4 more feed diz time give me constructive criticism instead of jus tha obvious

this was a solid piece, real gangsta lol ya know?......your structure was iight....but i wasnt feelin the font and colors...a little eye soring....you had excellent wordplay and good rhyme scheme the hook was nice......overall a solid drop...7.5/10...keep it comen fam

and get at me if you eva want to do a collab o yea ya vocab was tight too good job :thumbup:

erm aight drop consistent in aspects but a little too ya know?stop talkni bout the same thing nice vocab nice flow overall 6/10

I don't really enjoy reading pieces like this but anyway. The concept was uhm grimey and gangsta I suppose and that's the overall vibe it gave me as well. The vocab was on point, had some interesting shit in there, good lines with nice wordplay but I feel you could've used some more variation and creativity you know. The flow was good though.

Keep at it!

its was dope and nice way of using T.I's
Motivation its was a decent drop and decent
vocabulary ovarall ma nig u get a

9 out of 10

dat'z wazzup much luv 2 all tha real good & bad constructive criticism & not bs stuff jus comin out tha side of ya mouth fa sho