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Puertoricanelly \\\/// lusciousleftfoot
Yo this how it be (((((BLIND SPIT)))))
10-? lines No H8R votes No Crew Votes lets get this started G/L ~~~PeAcE~~~ |
AIGHT MAN DIS IS THE ONE YOU NEED TO SPIT IN lets do dis shit
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iight chckin in..........waitin' on your spit brau.....good luck`!
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parents lied to ya when they told ya you waz koo
u aint even kew enugh to go to skoo~... Leave ya face blue, you shoulda knew that i come somewhat of catholic ways..... i Lie and then prey im ur jesus on RB but u got notn to say cuz i ripped off your windpipe while you read ur first lyric cuz i didnt wanna hear it~~~ you more wacka than movies of steven segal,,, u a wack rappa that give me headaches thats why ima call my self tylenol..... cuz ill kill ya fasta than a disease from meat dats raw~ u wacker then walking around the mall`.... wit no money laugh at my rhymes but soon it wont be funny~ cuz ill leave ya dome lookin like a crash test dummy,,, ur rhymes more old that clothes on a Bum..B ur rhymes are too clumsy,,, realize whatchu doin u tryin to elevate but yur whole RB account is whatchu should b renewing u mad rappin at me when whoever wrote yur rhymes is who u should be suing |
im waitin on u boy
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Are you gonna spit cuz u taken a long time
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ya Spits Not Offendin Me.....you Bout To Get Popped Only Pussy On This Board Who Bout To Lose His Virginity//
You Bout As Soft As A Matress.....and I Gotta Gun Named Oscar Ready To Pop And Award This Actress// I'm Bored Cuz Of Your Whackness.....fuck A Chip On Ya Shoulder I'll Pull A Clip Out My Holster Just To Leave You Backless// Leftfoot's Rap Will Bury Him So Feel That......rican Must Be A Vetenarian Cuz He Got A Respect List But Never Kill Cats// Trample Ya Passive Lines......cuz If Ya Doubled Ya Rhymes You Still Couldn't Handle Half Of Mine's// Nigga I Got Half A Mind To Dis-pocket My Nine And Pop This Imposter// Don't Act Like Left's The Shocker Jus Cuz I Wrote Freestyle Rhyme That Checked His Shit Like A Prostate Doctor// I'm Not Even Comin' Hard I Can Make Mind's Fold When My Rhymes Hit// But Gettin A Blindfold While Brainin' Syphilis Dick Is Only Time This Rican Can Have An Ill Blind Spit// |
That Wuz X-actly 30 Minutes Man Whut You Cloggin' Tha Thread For Pm A Nigga Or Something.........freepostin' Ass
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vote/nelly
nelly you had a better verse......your punches hit hard and stuck./........you structure was better and overall a good verse......you could use some work on your personals and reword your punches luscious-you need to elevate.......you shouldnt put your shit in in bold it makes you look really Herbish.......work on your punches and your personals and elevate a lil bit and you should be good after some time return the favor..... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124528 v/nelly |
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YO I'M NOT KNOCKIN' YA VOTE....BUT DID YA READ OUR SPITS....CUZ NELLY DIDN'T HAVE ANY PERSONALS LIKE AT ALL.....BUT YOU SAID HE NEEDS TO WORK ON THEM???............. I CAN TELL YOU NEED TO ELEVATE............. |
fuck man this one wasnt even close, i dont know what the last nigga was thinkin, damn......
nelly-your structure was awful nigga, and your ryhmes was wack, didnt have no personals neither.... parents lied to ya when they told ya you waz koo u aint even kew enugh to go to skoo~... WTF IS THAT BULLSHIT??? luscious-ur flow wasnt too good, hella choppy, but your punches hit pretty hard....need more personals though.... luscious took this one by a fuckin landslide...... |
ya Spits Not Offendin Me.....you Bout To Get Popped Only Pussy On This Board Who Bout To Lose His Virginity//
This was a funny ass opener, feelin it.. You Bout As Soft As A Matress.....and I Gotta Gun Named Oscar Ready To Pop And Award This Actress// I'm Bored Cuz Of Your Whackness.....fuck A Chip On Ya Shoulder I'll Pull A Clip Out My Holster Just To Leave You Backless// 2 more solid bars here...the Battle was won already but Ima keep readin cuz this was nasty Leftfoot's Rap Will Bury Him So Feel That......rican Must Be A Vetenarian Cuz He Got A Respect List But Never Kill Cats// chuckle worthy Trample Ya Passive Lines......cuz If Ya Doubled Ya Rhymes You Still Couldn't Handle Half Of Mine's// Nigga I Got Half A Mind To Dis-pocket My Nine And Pop This Imposter// Don't Act Like Left's The Shocker Jus Cuz I Wrote Freestyle Rhyme That Checked His Shit Like A Prostate Doctor// Tight wordplay and punchline here I'm Not Even Comin' Hard I Can Make Mind's Fold When My Rhymes Hit// But Gettin A Blindfold While Brainin' Syphilis Dick Is Only Time This Rican Can Have An Ill Blind Spit// Not as hard as the rest of the verse but decent.... Yo honestly puertoricanelly wasn't garbage but he didn't have any lines that called out to me while Luscious did some damage quickly....Easy vote here for Luscious-- Please return the favor- I got like 3 or 4 battles goin on. |
whuz this battle only 3 votes???....whut type of cheatin' shit is that.....???
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uPpPin' for more votes....................................
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ayy man i keep re readin ur spit and it doesnt even csound like a blind spit the rules are that the battle was blind spit and u didnt sound like a blind spit it sorda sounds like a pre write
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