The Field
 

Great things have happened on the football field.

Its where I've thrown my first pass

Its Where I made my first run

Its Where I've had my first tackle

Its Where My first game was won

Its Where I made my first catch

Its Where I gained my first yard

Its Where I make myself proud

Its Where I play with all my heart

Its Where I first touched a ball

Its Where I met my first team

Its Where I had my first coach

Its called my field of dreams



Also....

Its where my life started

Its where I met my first love

Its where I had my heart broken

Its where me and my love broke up

Its where I had my first kiss

Its where I had my first hug

Its where my life ended

Its where everything got tough

Its where my life fell apart

Its where I had my first loss

Its where I broke down

Its where my heart stopped

yo ppl read this I worked hard. lol

lol, that was bad, so keep at it and hope you get better, or stop writing... i'll let you pick

double u tee eff. bad as in a good way. lol

No Bad as in your a piece of shit.................

No burn 30,000 leagues under the sea G...See? be,,,,,,,,,

wtf u talking about????

That wasn't good, but go out, buy a composition notebook, write all your garbage lines in there, don't show anybody for 2-3 years, and I bet you'll get better!

I agree, Linebacker55 you stupid bitch...

lol. how old are u two???

That wasn't bad

this is pretty tight dude.....

Its like the way you feel about the football field

and M-EAZY why you dissin this dude? lol your hilarious mister "LIL WAYNES THE BEST RAPPER ALIVE" you crack me up

thanx. finally. haters keep out. :(

um yeah. i guess im not dope. :huh: . i want some feedback

it was weird for me mann, like it wasnt dat tight. ur poem was real simple and yahhh... i dont know just practice dude lolz

um. i dont get it. i thought poetry was not supposed to be so damn complex.this poem is in the damn locker room. why isnt it good?!?!?!? fuck?!?!?!