a_m_h vs morse code
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16-18 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no hate or d/r votes Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 03-17-05 at 07:15 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
morse code has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 06:53 PM.
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ill kill this new "buck", then end his obituary with "dear"*
your not on my level boy, not even A.ll M.ost H.ere Ill beat you "repetitively", so get ready for a "losing streak" your skills on the scale, equals your age , against me your lines never connect, like the web and piced up phones im pacin a flow in a bag, like patients at nursing homes like pc mouses your moving no where, cuz you have no balls althoguh you did face me, a loss will be your "effect", and im the "cause" your attempts to rap will lead to "no where", like "trap doors" a "banana", would be the only time,youve ever been hard"core"** you wouldnt "shine" over me, if i gave you tickets to the "sun" closest youll get to winning is a "split" decision, like a "bun" only time your "shit" is on "point", is when "crappin on a pencil tip" like a retarded 9/11 terrorist, your punches will never hit this kids another 50 cent, claimin he started his leader *** im "cold" "hearted", so quick, pulll out your "hand" "heater"**** ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ dont forget the links in the verse *get it if hes a buck then hes a dear, then at the end you wood say sincerely, dear, cuz thats wut he is, instead of dear at the top **a banana, is a fruit, but doesnt have a core, but theres a such thing as a banana clip, and other fruits have cores, get it? ***his leaders old name is contraversy ****get it cold...heater, heart...hand///DAMN quicky but enuff to beat him, dont vote if you dont understand |
A_M_H has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 07:12 PM.
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AMH is in thiz bitch.... Diversity fuel's ya state of sex...Absurity That'll I'll be in Sig "Text"- So "X" the thought of AMH Bein'g next...Is Oxymoronic like "Simply Complexx"- Dismantling ""Codes''''...Thats "Period" like when a "Sentence Ends- Beatin This "Fake Thug Trend" like the start of "Tennis Trends"... Menace Decends' thats the "Code!"...Stretch-N-bend...Like "Tendons-Mend-the-Joint"- Annoint' ya "Book" so ya alphabets "Slick"...i mentioned"...it...How bout a Diet?... Just try it...My rhyme's is like "Gravity"...u cant "Defie It- This victory' u couldnt "Buy it...Actually...U could tie it' if ya knew how to divide the votes u "Deny bitch"..."Make up" ya List of "Lied" on victom's every "Five Minutes"- Leave "DENIED" painted on ya eyelids'...Like blind retired "Pilots".... Tryin to "fly" "High lifts" with extreme "Milage"...Hey flava..this guys ~!~ "Stylish" as a "Pile of shitt"..Wouldnt Spit flames virally sick' with a "Viel Of Flint"...Leave "X" vets"RetirinQuik"... |
that was a nice verse tho morse code fo sho .................but uppin this 4 sum votes
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upppin, nice multies and vocab for you too amh, impressed, might be close, dont really know which way the votes will go
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Voted For: A_M_H
this was a good battle very close and tuff decision but AMH got this cuz off better structure and slightly better punches very close the wordplay goes to morse code with the almot here line and cause and effect i liked this line from A_M_H Leave "DENIED" painted on ya eyelids'...Like blind retired "Pilots".... i smell a re match on this battle when its over and i'm lookin forward for it very good drops from both but A_M_H got it in the end Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
iight......uppin, but how in the world wuz his structure better, that was his weakest category, but w/e....
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Voted For: morse code
Morse: ill kill this new "buck", then end his obituary with "dear"* your not on my level boy, not even A.ll M.ost H.ere ^^ name plays like that are wack 3/10 Ill beat you "repetitively", so get ready for a "losing streak" your skills on the scale, equals your age , against me ^^decent personal 5/10 your lines never connect, like the web and piced up phones im pacin a flow in a bag, like patients at nursing homes ^^good metas 7/10 like pc mouses your moving no where, cuz you have no balls althoguh you did face me, a loss will be your "effect", and im the "cause" ^^ first line played as fuck second line wack 3/10 your attempts to rap will lead to "no where", like "trap doors" a "banana", would be the only time,youve ever been hard"core"** ^^decent 5/10 you wouldnt "shine" over me, if i gave you tickets to the "sun" closest youll get to winning is a "split" decision, like a "bun" ^^good metas but you worded the 2nd line wrong took awat the effectiveness 6/10 only time your "shit" is on "point", is when "crappin on a pencil tip" like a retarded 9/11 terrorist, your punches will never hit ^^good metas 7/10 this kids another 50 cent, claimin he started his leader *** im "cold" "hearted", so quick, pulll out your "hand" "heater"**** ^^not too dope.. 5/10 overall: 41/80 (51%) AMH: Diversity fuel's ya state of sex...Absurity That'll I'll be in Sig "Text"- So "X" the thought of AMH Bein'g next...Is Oxymoronic like "Simply Complexx"- ^^good meta decent opener 5/10 Dismantling ""Codes''''...Thats "Period" like when a "Sentence Ends- Beatin This "Fake Thug Trend" like the start of "Tennis Trends"... ^^wack 3/10 Menace Decends' thats the "Code!"...Stretch-N-bend...Like "Tendons-Mend-the-Joint"- wack 4/10 Annoint' ya "Book" so ya alphabets "Slick"...i mentioned"...it...How bout a Diet?... Just try it...My rhyme's is like "Gravity"...u cant "Defie It- ^^decent metas decent multies 6/10 This victory' u couldnt "Buy it...Actually...U could tie it' if ya knew how to divide the votes u "Deny bitch"..."Make up" ya List of "Lied" on victom's every "Five Minutes"- Leave "DENIED" painted on ya eyelids'...Like blind retired "Pilots".... ^^no idea where this bar ends or starts so 11/20 Tryin to "fly" "High lifts" with extreme "Milage"...Hey flava..this guys ~!~ "Stylish" as a "Pile of shitt"..Wouldnt Spit flames virally sick' with a "Viel Of Flint"...Leave "X" vets"RetirinQuik"... ^^wack bars 7/20 Overall: 37/80 (46%) AMH your rhyme scheme and structure are fucked up no way i could ever vote for you in any battle with it like that even ya lines up and show where the bar ends and starts cuz how you rhymin is wack and thats being honest i vote fairly Vote: Morse Code |
^koo, uppin
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Voted For: morse code
its like dis MC: ya best line was..."your attempts to rap will lead to "no where", like "trap doors" a "banana", would be the only time,youve ever been hard"core"**"...i didnt need a explanation really...if u didnt get dat one u sorry...dat shit ws hot as hell weak point..."this kids another 50 cent, claimin he started his leader *** im "cold" "hearted", so quick, pulll out your "hand" "heater"****"...wasnt really gettin no where to me homie...i didnt get it even wit tha link and explanation AMH: best..."This victory' u couldnt "Buy it...Actually...U could tie it' if ya knew how to divide the votes u "Deny bitch"..."Make up" ya List of "Lied" on victom's every "Five Minutes"-"...dat was on point...even tho it aint hit hard, it was iight to me weak...Menace Decends' thats the "Code!"...Stretch-N-bend...Like "Tendons-Mend-the-Joint"-Annoint' ya "Book" so ya alphabets "Slick"...i mentioned"...it...How bout a Diet?..."...WTF???...gimmie a explanation please struc...MC vocab...AMH punches...MC explanationz...MC and dis aint a d/r vote either...its real... v-Morse Code |
Voted For: morse code
your skills on the scale, equals your age , against me ^^best line there punches-morse flow-hmm kinda both multies-morse creativity-well lacked, but morse got it good battle ova all i guess v/morse Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^lol, thanx ne way
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