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Whatever...
I'm bored so i'll write a random verse... With no beat because my soundcard broke -_- ...
A tad on the surreal plane, Pondering why I feel strange Maybe I need some cats to call me by my real name Damn the band.. John and his 50 other personalities On the real I hate rap, but hip-hop keeps callin back at me You know what I mean? Thats the weight that I got Bunny emcees tryna be hip, and fakin the hop And I aint tryna state that im hot, cos i'll be the first to state that im not But im still tryna make a break for the top, the burning desires in me The rhyming, the fire, its in me... But the place that im from, the shit that I spit, the color my skin be might hold me back for a minute or two but check it, ima king a fuckin winner, im due A sinner? thats true.. When im in the booth I get wild Cause fights with P when im locked up with Akon....... I Kick styles check the internet fa me n', you'll find a soundclick wit sum hot tracks I got a pot stash, that usually don't last past a hot flash dont even know what the fuck i'm talkin, but fuck i'm poppin off at the mouth wit fucks n' mockin all you chumps n' cocks n', faggot emcees.. fuck rap, ya take it up the ass n' even suck at walkin or maybe you suck while walkin.. but i aint homophobic, i just hate homos 'bout as much as i hate hobos, so fuck all u bums n ya bonerfide gay photos n' fuck a click, i stay solo.. Don't step to the heat, i ain't talkin a gun, i'm talkin my flow Stalkin a ho, cop n' a grow-op on the low, rockin a show Thats my life, no stoppin it bro... nobody gets over me though I take back what I said, fuck John, its OMB yo... fucka structure i'll get links in a second.... |
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pretty hot for a random verse u just did outta nowhere, it actuallymade some sense. nice flow in there and some pretty good multies, u did ya thing in there for bein bored lol. this was my fav bar=
A sinner? thats true.. When im in the booth I get wild Cause fights with P when im locked up with Akon....... I Kick styles ^^pretty hot bar, i was feelin that ish keep doin ya shit..1.. RTF and go drop an honest vote on my battle wit Stanza ....links in the sig |
nice verse OMB lol...king of mltis showed up wit hot ones...nice story lol...good wordplay and vocab as always...on par wit all yur others lol...9/10...rtf on the long OM in my sig lol
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There. Both favors returned :thumbup:
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You know what I mean? Thats the weight that I got
Bunny emcees tryna be hip, and fakin the hop Thats my life, no stoppin it bro... nobody gets over me though I take back what I said, fuck John, its OMB yo... word, this was coo....nobody drops really random stuff anymore......its always blah blah, diss this person, or my gf hates me.....something unoriginal like that......but this was decent multies were fun to read, although it didn't really go anywhere, it was intriguing/gripping.....nah saying? word to OMB ^ those were my fav lines...btw....word |
i wasssuzz feelin this fam,,................
same shit im sayin.but imma bout to put it audio /. . n who cares////////////\??????????????????? . . . i do bro..!!!!!!!!!! |
Nice random verse.
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This was a pretty tight random verse..
Structure like you said was off... but it was still easy to read, You had nice multies.... Good creativity... Nice wordplay, alittle short ... but nice.. Overall this is all i can say , nothing really to judge. nice random verse.. keep it up |
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