My Structure
 

Aight people say my structure sucks shit. I agree with them look at my record. They say I have decent vocab and some good lines and shit. I'm always losing because of my structure. Can someone help me out herre? I need some advice. I'm gonna end up with the shittiest record on herre. If you people could maybe throw in a few lines and such to show good structure, you know just as an example.

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It's simple really

Think of a punch

then make a set up for it

Blah blah blah

Then follow with the punche

blah blah blah
blah blah blah blah blah

It'll usually come out like that.

Now take the lines and arrange the words so the lines come out even

Bla Blah Blah Bluh
Blah bla lbah bloh

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dont have to be a punch since it could be on open mics too

anyway

lines even

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question answered please dont post anymore

Who the fuck do you think you are a mod or something get da fuck out ..

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