••••Dice•••• vs SQUAD-UP
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6 - bars max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 02-24-05 at 05:27 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
••••Dice•••• has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-21-05 05:29 PM.
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can u do me a favor n go drop an honest vote on this battle before we do ours?
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177821 |
can u do me a favor n go drop an honest vote on this battle before we do ours?
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177821 |
Allow me to introduce myself Squad I am your conscience,
WTF we do’n here? Ya know Dice is nice with the phonics, Us in a battle please...it’s just nonsense, Look fool!!! We can’t even spell Eboniks, Put us in the spotlight ‘n’ now I gotta try to save this case… Fuk let’s just do what we did last time, (bite to save some face)… Ya know them kids is kidding they say you got some skill, I know losses are tough to swallow, but here…take the pill. It's no joke don’t get me wrong, but ya heart’n’head wanted me to pass this note along “WTF? YOU DEAF? THAT FAT BITCH IS SING’N YOUR SONG” Not try’n to sound cold, but when have we came up with one good punch? Call it a hunch, but I’m think’n we stay-in-school, c’mon, let’s go pack your lunch. |
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SQUAD-UP has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 10:28 PM.
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SQUUUUUUUAAAADUP!!!!
chea, yo imagine me losin, gettin juked by a crook nah,u can almost measure this gay, callhim fruit by thefoot ya spirit crushed, it b trampled n solemn if u bet u could win, then i guess u got a gamblin problem can't believe the mouthin on this fool, i b doubtin on this dude he got a dickridin calculator, cuz he countin on his crew Dice, u small to me, you aint nothin large rough sex wit his rhymebook, only time ya bars was FUCKIN HARD a trusty lesson, when i swing wit this rusty weapon his wins plus losses is only way dice gets Lucky 7 im not kind, and im no benign in fact i say fuck playin wit dice, cuz his rhymes is CRAPS....EASSSY |
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This was feedback posted for SQUAD-UP
just feedin tiLL i can vote:
STYLE: u both got creative thoughts, different from the fresh shit ive been reading, SQUAD-UP executed his lines a bit harder than dice, slight edge here PUNCH: i think squad delivered some better ones, although dice's "taking the piLL" line was up there if i read the pun correctly FLOW: squad started off broken but came thru well in the end, dice has awesome rhythm between setup lines and punchlines, but when u put the whole thing together, somethings amiss TECHNIQUE: u both avoided plain old crap, which i like... ok enough input im not even voting here S: SQUAD-UP > ••••Dice•••• (slightly) P: SQUAD-UP > ••••Dice•••• F: SQUAD-UP > ••••Dice•••• T: =tiE= OVERALL: i think if u took a little more time, u could both easily cut out some unnecessary wording, but besides that pretty tight battle here VOTE: stiLL cant, but wouldve been for SQUAD-UP |
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP
he got a dickridin calculator, cuz he countin on his crew thats the line that did for me plus i didn t understand the other guy sayin we all the time both decent drops but squad had this one for content ..........v squad .....return some feedback in songs forum for "sick of this " by tonyself and seven third holla |
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