FlowS EternaL vs oCANti
 

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I Stay Verbally Blasting Guys, yall speakin everlasting lies,
Im sharp as a blade but your less 'Cutting Edge' than Fast Food Joints Plastic Knives..!!
Im quick to Come n Attack wit Many Swords, Strangle wit Cords,
I 'Drew ya Spine wit chalk' and had ya 'Back to the Drawing Board'..!!
In my raps i don't talk bout Bling n things i Got, but i do talk about how i wanna kill you n awful lot,
cause i said 'Don't get it twisted' and you got it in a Knot..!!
My Real skills is what you Lack, cause like michal vick on bad days your gonna get sacked,
Im not even Gonna 'FRONT', ima jus put the gun to ya 'BACK'..!!
My lyrics get more 'HOLY" then the bible, Im ya Idol,
I was quick to throw CAN(oCANti) away lyke people who Recycle..!!

my bad I was in another battle and didn't noticed you set it up but consider this my check in and I'll drop in like 10 minutes

ayte.............................................. .................................................. ..............................................wait in on ya drop dawg

Fuck a bible and fuck your sayings /you didn't read my profile
I'm anti-bullshit, /and processed wordz are not my style
you talkin out the side of ya neck /and you not attackin nobody you clown
you're borderline a.d.d /slash one hell of an ugly child
There's a lot of things you want/ like to be a battle rapper
you'd have a better chance /doing back up dancing for clown dancers
I'll tell u one thing.../u frog face lookn bastard
i like u cuz you're about as soft /as that friendly ghost named casper
but the next time u think /that you out did me with a verse filled with typos
know that your notepad is the only thing gettin recycled

opener:flows eternal
closer:ocanti
punches:ocanti
personals:neither
Structure:ocanti
metaphors:neither


If I could post I'd go with ocanti cuz I followed hers better and it had more punches for once in her life...
Flows you had a shaky opener, work on your punches, and the way you structure your rhymes.

But elevation is prescribed for both of you

Ok oCANti took this battle by far punchline and metaphors and every asepct of hip-hop she took this guy in the blender and had herself a flows eternal shake.

Peace out

haha Cani, you had some good shit in this one
"
I Stay Verbally Blasting Guys, yall speakin everlasting lies,
Im sharp as a blade but your less 'Cutting Edge' than Fast Food Joints Plastic Knives..!!"

That's pretty funny

I think you should have made it a little more personal though, but still you took it easily. Too bad I can't vote yet! haha


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093

opener:flows eternal
closer:canti
punches:canti
personals:tie
Structure:canti
metaphors:tie

im gonna have to give diss one to canti he ripped it harded than FE

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Votes in here c'mon you could read one more battle...