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rexless 07-09-06 03:15 PM

raw king vs rexless
 
Battle Rules:

18 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-12-06 at 03:15 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

System 07-09-06 03:48 PM

Raw King has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-06 03:48 PM.

The Creator 07-09-06 04:41 PM

18 lines? ok

god, forgive this kid, he asked me check in and battle
Im a simplify the verse, cuz big words leave em baffled
u fucking ass hole, I'll leave u constipated wit out pills
I MUST be wak, cuz he say he could beat me....even wit out skillz
so understand u not needed like huggin with quadraplegics
U fruit basket, rexless should change his rapname to Peaches
cuz we know rex waz here when the floors been sparkled
cuz we mop it wit em till he sideways like low riders at car shows
homie u not a real rapper like recyclable plastic on candy
and I'll blow a hole in u the size of the trunk on a camry
the fact that I dropd a verse is enough to scare the shit out u
I would do some personals, but u being wak is all we need to know about u
cuz 18 lines? i could go atleast 20 or 30
u must have had a earge to just to get murderd a little early
this ur daily dosage of asswhoopings, I know u need ur fix worst
cuz Id be worried about ur dick riders, but really, dont u need a dick first?
and the last bars just a filler to fill ur chest till rex done
rex a lil less then he was, I'll beat em till he change his name to "Rex'none"

quick drop...good luck dawg.

System 07-12-06 11:34 AM

rexless has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-12-06 11:34 AM.

rexless 07-13-06 05:36 PM

only way u be a "raw king" if i gave u the crown an left ya with flesh wonds
test whom?, i can tell with votes u'll have "zero-in" like cammra's in test rooms
FOOL aint shit going good for ya in the LBL so stop front'in
cuz agnist a rookie.....u'r only 2 vote's even said u bearly had something
U 2-5, so ya need to stop bluff'in.. cuz i dig facts an "get the scoop"
sorda like ya face, after you had that battle agnist troop ( 5-1)
an it go's further then that but i dont wanna go there
cuz following hes history track i'll lead you to nowhere
just a place that fags live an like to put on girl-wear
an dont try to hind.... am out here to deep
u'r verse like monday news " diss weak"
u thinking a sweep?, u must be working for comuniaty service
am palution the serface with rules in this circus...............
thats leave u coverd in white like a room full of nurses
u right man... we both knew who' would win.. so why u aint duck?
boy you suck, my hammers buck.... with bullets u'll see sliding like a mc donald cup!
an my style the reason u steal words.... an just know am for real herd
cuz its a "horra sceen" when am "shoting clips" at a king like steven-spielburg...
u aint da king.. u the queen of the text, how u gonna rep when am squeezin dem shellz
u dont feen for the reack so u aint defeating rex!, cuz like blind smokers..Trust im never seening the L.... EZ!!!

The Creator 07-13-06 08:22 PM

wow...I thought my spelling was bad....lol....str8 verse rex....

uppin for votes...

The Creator 07-13-06 08:27 PM

wooooohhh
 
I just thought about something.....u talked about my LBL record when ur real RV record is 9 - 9 and mine is 5 - 1. and my one lost was cuz I got dq'd while battling a 12 years cuz I whent under the minimum lines for that battle. oh well....we probably gonna have to battle on LBL sooner or later too. lets just use the same verses for that shit when it happends...lol..jk...

rexless 07-14-06 06:18 PM

nice drop....
upp'in for votes...

i just went off my head with whatever an i just so happen to remember while typing aout ya records an battle so i just tossed a few but lets get them votes in...


see ya in the LBL ;)

Dickard. 07-18-06 10:13 AM

Voted For: Raw King

Punches:Raw-King, its obvious he had more fluent harder hitting punches that where appealing and noticable.REX you had some okay stuff but really lacked the hard hitting stuff that you woulda needed againgst RAW.

Originality-Raw-king had some good creative stuff presented in his verse he came a lot harder then his opponent...some lines were weak...but some were pretty hard...only like 1 was played .......rex your shit was just like u were trying to be hard...but it didnt quite make sense..

structure-raw king...cuz i could pin point his punches and it made them mroe affecctive....rext yours punches were like delayed..cuz u had some spelling problems..and ur structure just threw the flow of ur verse off...gotta elevate.

over all i think raw king straight up took this.....rex you did your thing no doubt...just gotta get your spelling and flow down so the reader isnt confused...

raw nice job...

v/raw king

rtf if i ever have batttles open dog.

The Creator 07-18-06 10:30 PM

wow....I forgot all about this shit on the real...lol...oh well...one more for me...thanks Myst for the vote and feedback dowg.


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